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Hi ya there Katrina!!! I smile, this false smile, A mask of lies, Under which I hide. A nice introduction, though very touching and sad:( Will anyone ever know, The ...

Hello Katrina! So I am still an avid fan of your poetry! We are all pieces of a shattered dream, Each desperately seeking our reality. Wow, this is a really ...

Hi MVB627! So, I liked it, but the formatting was kind of a mess, lol. I took a piece of your piece and took out the parenthesis and made it ...

Hi ya Katrina, So I really love your poetry and I am definitely an avid follower. One small issue I have with this poem is the comas. They seem to ...

Hey hey hey! Wow, you are really good at poetry! This one was very beautiful and kind of sad at the same time. I loved the vivid descriptions, they painted ...

Hi Kat, Thanks for letting me know you posted some work. Wow, it was very good. I love reading/writing "ballads of the heart". I liked it because it could either ...

Hi there Leah! So lets start off with a few nit picks: "Love". The word flows from her freshly scarred skin. This sentence was a bit confusing which takes away ...

Hi ya there! Wow, I really enjoyed your story it clipped along at a nice pace, took me for a spin, then set my down feeling a bit flustered but ...

Hi again! Just a few little nit-picks: He stared into his eyes I think you meant to say "her eyes" The feeling eloped them both Eloped means to run away ...

Hi Bhayden, I haven't seen the contest so I don't know what you were going for but I really enjoyed reading your piece. It was very descriptive and sad and ...

Hi ya there! I really enjoyed reading your story. It was fun and light-hearted with a good sense of comical humor and moved along at a nice pace. I liked ...

Hi Spinelli, Wow, you had me laughing out loud. I could totally picture the whole scene. You did an awesome job of letting us get to know Fletch as a ...

Hi Midnight Rider, So I'm here to do a review. I'm ok with doing "long" pieces because if you read my own work, you will find most to be dreadfully ...

Wow. I'm really impressed, your story was awesome! It flowed very nicely and was full of color and life. I'm also impressed by how "complete" of a short story it ...

Hi Cammie, So I'm just going to start off with a few nit-picks, 'kay? Trixie’s mother’s sweet sing-songy voice echoed in the room. I froze and quickly pushed the lid ...