Young Writers Society

Hihi, Daisuki here. So, when I started reading this I was a little unsure because the writing sounded pretty simple. "I heard a ringing in my ears. The ringing was ...

Hihi! I really like your style of writing. Even from the first few sentences I could tell I would enjoy this. Also, congradulations on getting to the 20th Chapter. I'm ...

Hey! I don't know a lot of the context here, and it looks like you had a nice review by Noelle, but I'll do my best to give some input. ...

Hi there! Hope you don't mind me popping in on a story I haven't read the beginning of. You said that you wanted to revise this later, so I won't ...

Hey there! This is my first review in a long while, forgive me if I'm rusty. I hope you don't mind me hopping in on this chapter when I haven't ...

Hey Spark, Daisuki here! I reeeeeally like your writing. But contrary to most people, I like to save praise for the end of the review. So let's start off with ...

Hello! Daisuki here to review! I really liked the beginning of this. I often have trouble reading things because the beginning is boring, but your first words really drew me ...

I'm really tired right now and not mentally able to write a review this piece deserves, but I wanted to say I really liked it. It kept me interested, and ...

Woah woah woah. Esther! I haven't seen you in ages! And here I run into this gorgeous poem of yours. I really, really like this. I love the rhythm and ...

Hey Peanut! Nice essay! When I tried to write mine, I went and looked up some of the winner's speeches just to get a feel of what other people did. ...

I don't have time to write a good review right now, but I want to say I reeeeally liked it. I liked how subtle the first part is, however I ...

Dude, that was really awesome! Definately works really well as spoken poetry, your voice made some things rhyme that probably wouldn't have in text. I love the ocean imagery, but ...

Awww... ya didn't have to change it, but I do like the ending line. I think it fits his personality well. I don't hear that line much, so it's not ...

I really loved this! Part of this review will be completely opinion, and the other part I'll try to help. So... starting with the ideas of this. The first scene ...

I think the user above me covered most of it, but I'd like to point out that some paragraphs and seperation would be nice. On these computer screens, it's hard ...