Cynder

Whoa.. That was good. I suck at rhyming myself so.. nice job! First off, I think you could change the ending from And life prepares for another day of light. ...

Nice post! Cynder here with a review. That was an interesting story, and I liked how you described the scene around the princess. I think though, that you could add ...

Whoa... that was a little hard to follow because I only know a little about relationships.. but I really enjoyed it. I think... K so.. I might need some explanation, ...

Wow, that was very engaging. It was so true to my heart that I had to look away for a second before finishing it. That was brilliant, and I'm so ...

Wow, that was simple and elegant. It seems like you had an inspired idea, but you couldn't find the right words, like a dead end dream when you're about to ...

Haha, I see the emotion you have here:) Actually, I don't like the locker room girls either. I got elbowed in the face once, that was fun. Anyway, I think ...

OMG! That was very well explained, I mean I could understand most every thought process. There was one I didn't though and that was "he." Who made the controversy, who ...

So, I liked it a lot. It felt like something was missing though.. Like in the scene where he was crying, I think you could add more emotion to it. ...

Cynder here. On the positive side, I think your writing has true feeling behind it. I can tell you aren't rambling about a topic of no concern to you. I ...

I love it!! Cynder happy to review. There arent many things wrong at all with this poem except maybe one thing. I would think about a setting. How big the ...

Hey! Cynder ready to review. I pove the theme of the story, or at least how. i perceive the theme to be. The main character's attitude is one of my ...

Hey, this is Cynder. I like your work because I'm hooked by the emotion. If I were to see if I can help in any way, I would say.. I ...

I can't wait to read the next in the series, wow. Please keep writing them! Ok, so if I were to point something out, hm.. ok so the ending I ...

Your work is not my type actually, but I found myself drawn to it anyway. That is a gift my friend. You have me sucked into your world, where everything ...

Hey, this is Cynder. I like your work, it has a good thought put into it. I can see that you're a good writer. There were only a few things ...