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Re: One Christmas Day
Hi my name is Kira and i'm going to be reviewing your work today. Okay so first of all, my mind and my heart is in pieces and i have ...
Apr 28, 2021 -
Re: The Cry of the Fallen Angel Pt. 1
Hi, i'm CyberGenji aka (Daddy Moriarty, you know who i be) and i'll be reviewing your work today. So lemme just start off by saying, Holy Sh*t boy was that ...
Nov 5, 2020 -
Re: march on, little soldier.
HI there, i'll be reviewing your poetry today. First of all, really well done. My only complaint would be you lack capitalization in the necessary places. 1. "step in line ...
Nov 4, 2020 -
Re: Queen (Chp 2.)
Hi there I'm CyberGenji and i'll be reviewing your work today. 1. "a male approached me" I think replacing "male" with "guy", "man" or anything else would sound better. 2. ...
Oct 7, 2020 -
Re: Mindfulness Poem
Hi there, I'm CyberGenji and i'll be reviewing your poetry today. First of all, it's very simple and short but it's very well done. "Emotions are an ocean"- this single ...
Sep 27, 2020 -
Re: His Name is Richard - Prologue
Hi there, I'm CyberGenji and i'll be reviewing your work today. 1. "had made their choose" - it'll be choice. 2."He could already see the ceremony"- in this case i ...
Sep 26, 2020 -
Re: The Harvest - Chapter 11
Hi there i'm CyberGenji and i'll be reviewing your chapter today. First of all, really well written, the flow of the story is really great. not a single second where ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: Black Lives Matter pt2
Okay First of all, beautiful poem, it conveys a matter that people need to pay attention greatly too. That being said, i didn't find any major errors just a few ...
Jul 31, 2020