CupcakeQueen123

I actually had no clue what the different meters were until the other day when I was like "yannow what imma google these bc I'll need to know them if ...

Oc! I can tell its very important to you. It's really a lovely poem. :) You too!

Nothing big, just grammar stuff. :) I didn't mean it like that, I'm sorry it sounds rude. I just meant the minuscule errors I pointed out above. It's really good. ...

FIXED THE JELLO PART and I actually like this new metaphor a lot better tbh. :) Thx for the suggestion!

Thanks :D I give you credit for the butterfly metaphor. You've been calling her that for years, and only recently did it really click. Yea, I agree with the jello ...

Aw thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! This review is so sweet... :))

:D Thank you! It delights me to know that my readers understand the concept. It's a tricky one, abandonment... Quite possibly the worst feeling, to me at least. And I'm ...

Hi!! Thank you so much :) I try my best haha although with this one, I was kind of just rambling at 12 in the morning. I've looked at some ...

This made my day. :) Thank you so much!!! I'm working on a poem right now, actually... It's about butterflies and leeches and rotting corpses. I think you'll quite enjoy ...

Love the ending! The story as a whole is pretty great -- just a little rough around the edges. Like someone mentioned earlier, I was really expecting some action so ...

Nononono don't be sorry I love nit-picky-ness! I'll be sure to go back and fix up some punctuation :) THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME REVIEW I'm glad it gave you ...

I trust your judgement :) The story is sooo cool and the whole character thing makes more sense the way you explain it. Looking forward to the next part!

A+++

haha I get exactly what you mean. don't worry -- im like 99% sure that when I wrote this, I wasn't actually planning to commit homicide. like you said, it's ...

haha. thanks? sorry it sounds insane... I actually had to go back myself the morning after I wrote this and sort through it all & make sense of it. I ...