CupcakeQueen123

Aw you're so sweet thank you!! :) I'm gonna go fix the stanza problem rn lol you're right the lengthy chunk of words could be off-putting xD

Thanks! Yea, I tried separating it, but the YWS publishing center editing thing just won't let me separate stanzas. Hm. Maybe I'll try putting like a dot in between each ...

I'm sorry for your loss. :( And yea no problem!

thank you haha :) cool pfp ^^

Hi! This is Cupcake, from earlier. :) First off, thanks so much for reviewing my poem. OKAY. So. You were wrong; you're actually a pretty great writer. I can tell ...

Thanks so much for the feedback! :) Yea, this isn't my best work rhyme-scheme wise -- or, really, just in general. The fourth stanza, for example, kinda sucks. I had ...

Thanks so much for the review, especially after reading "5 pm." It means a lot. I consistently find myself trapped in my own rhyme scheme, which, like you mentioned, really ...

Oh my gosh. Sorry. I probably should have specified when I asked for a review. This poem sucks. I know. I wrote it in a hurry and didn't bother editing ...

First of all, thank you so much! :D :D :D Also, that's exactly what I was trying to get at -- this infatuation with someone so deep that you come ...

Yay! Thank you so much!

It's fixed, now. :))

Thank YOU. :) I completely agree with you... when I read it over myself, I wondered if I should a meter or a rhyme scheme or *something* to give it ...

Oc fam! :) Just little areas, like that phrase with the "me," but I see you've already fixed that. :) The phrase "seemingly perfect skin" is another one. I get ...

HAHA true :D Np fam!

Aw. Thanks so much! :)