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Good job, Raiden Cheese! And let me pause this review for a second to compliment you on your profile picture! Go anime! Go No Game No Life! Yeah! Actually I ...

I've got to say, I really enjoyed this story. It's fairly well-paced, and deals with an interesting issue; that is, the pain of parents forced to give up their children ...

Congrats, tb1962! This is an interesting story. Taco Bell is my arch nemesis as well, lol! Now, this needs a little work. First of all, make sure to remember the ...

A Midsummer Night's Dream is one of my favorite plays, so this interested me a lot! Now, there were some problems. For example, I don't know if this was a ...

Interesting. I like your concept, and your presentation is definitely intriguing. The way you used dialogue without punctuation was reminiscent (for me, at least), of the works of Cormac McCarthy. ...

This is an interesting story, with some great descriptive imagery. However, there are some problems. For example, the text of this story is sort of crammed into a small area--this ...

Hey kaializzy! Cool story! I like your concept--there's something almost Shel Silverstein-esque about the man and the piano--it reminds me of The Giving Tree for some reason! Still, I definitely ...

So, this is a good concept, and I think it made for an interesting story. However, there are a couple of issues. When reading the story, I sort of assumed ...

Just a note--the blank comment was a total accident. Sorry! Now, onto your hilarious story! OK, this is so, so true. Especially the game board-flipping part! I ended up laughing ...

Wow! This was great! I loved the twist ending--what a wonderful idea! Still, I did end up shedding a few tears for that poor, poor future piece of calamari. His ...

This is an interesting story. I had to read it twice, however, to understand exactly what was going on. If I were you, I'd add a little bit more detail ...

Hey regismare! I really liked this story, specifically because of your writing style. I can tell that you have a talent with words just by reading; everything really flows together. ...

This was very good! Your writing is straight-up fantastic, and you definitely sucked me in the instant I looked. Once I started reading, I felt like I became part of ...

Positive things first--I like the descriptive imagery in this. It's really quite beautiful, and I can easily imagine it being on a page in one of my favorite books. However--there's ...

This was a hilarious story! If there really is such a thing as a Chocoholic's Anonymous meeting, trust me, I need to go! The way that you made chocolate into ...