Crysi

Because she can. Maybe she just wants to know if it sounds like a good idea or not. The first few paragraphs can make or break a story. Don't be ...

Chill. There was a misunderstanding. Accept it and move on. Jack, I love this. Jeez, if a guy were to hand this poem to me, I'd be his forever. I'd ...

This just seemed like whiny teen angst from someone who, not to take away the value of what you might be feeling, doesn't have it nearly as bad as she ...

*nods* I agree as well. The ending seems far too abrupt in contrast. It sounds like you were starting a novel for school but it was due the next day ...

That's really.. profound. Really thought-provoking. I kind of got lost in the conversation between Jordan and his ex.. I guess it's a little over my head tonight. It looks like ...

I really liked the second one. Mesh, I'm stealing your copy of the fifth once you finish. I have to read it! What's REALLY cool is that if you go ...

Wow.. I LOVED the scenery changes! Reminded me that I need to show changes of season in my own story.. It was beautifully written, anyway. Not concentrating on the relationship ...

*growls lightly* Misty.. A lot of what you commented on was basically Brad's style. And PLEASE never judge a piece by the writer's avatar. That disgusts me. Moving on.. Beautifully ...

Wow. I loved all the suspense and mystery. And the view from the antagonist. Very interesting.. Very disturbing, but interesting. You already addressed what I was going to comment on: ...

I really like this. It's kind of like a sad daydream. And I really like the lack of punctuation.. I think it makes it even better. Too much punctuation would ...

..Wow. Like Jack, this really touched me. Because I, too, have had conversations just like this.. ugh. Winter.. real conversations are this long, and longer. I have some saved. I'll ...

Brad, you're always hard on yourself!! You put down your looks and now your poetry. Stop being so damn BLIND! I'll be blunt here. You write the best damn poetry ...

This is really interesting. I do remember doing this when I was little.. I really want to see if I can "train" myself to do this now! Thanks for the ...

I've read Macbeth and R&J in school. R&J is priceless for it's sexual innuendos, we went into far too much depth with them. My teacher didn't explain much of it, ...

I love this. It's so powerful, as are all of your poems. Let my try to clear up the 'anger to "sweets"' line.. I believe it means he's angry toward ...