Crysi

Hello! I'm not afraid of R-rated works. ;) Lip on lip skin on skin, breath get hard, harsh, heavy, helpless, heat rise, your touch your beat your breath creeping (little) ...

Whoa. Just... whoa. Like running water rips a stone apart atom by atom, it happened slowly. Well, he always was as sure of himself as the Mississippi. Excellent beginning! I ...

Hello, dear -- This is quite lovely, and I like the energy and the feeling behind it. However, I think you may have mistakenly posted in the wrong area: lyric ...

Hello! This poem actually reminds me of a few pieces I wrote, so I figured I'd give a comment or two. :) I want to die, I want to cry, ...

Hullo there! Yes, Crysi is venturing into the forums once more... Quite a scary thought, but I dare say you'll survive. ;) On to the critique! Silken chants I can't ...

Crysi's critiquing again? What? Oh snap! Life: Love it! Love love love this beginning. I guess all it took was a simple voice, A voice that turned into a million ...

Wow. Didn't realize YWS was getting so serious. Sure, it's probably not a publishable piece, but sometimes you just have to have fun. Now, I can understand a bit of ...

Just thought I'd point out that Crysi, here on YWS, has Synesthesia. If you would like more insight on this, PM her. ;) Lol! Yeah, and I haven't heard from ...

So, I just read this, and I really don't have much to say about it. Though "custumer" still isn't right. ;) I got halfway down the page before the title ...

So, I was directed here from your blog, and I have to say you did a great job! I remember my first kiss, and the nervousness and the rush of ...

Very clever! I agree with the above -- you could stand to add a few more of your own lines, I think. But I really like what you have here. ...

Personally, I disagree -- a warning is not necessary. Though I am Christian, if this was a Hindu piece, or a Muslim piece, or even an atheist piece, I wouldn't ...

...Love at first site. *snorts* Perfect ending. I half-groaned, half-laughed at that. Good one. Overall, nice story. Kind of has the same feel as the Empress Chronicles Dono used to ...

So, this was really amusing, and I'll probably do something similar in Stat (since I no longer have to use that class to study for flying! Yay!), but I though ...

Aw, all the awesome ancient kids posted on this. I saw the title and knew it had to be from either you or Bek. Ah, good days. And the world ...