All written by yours truly ^^ Try not to be too offended. 
The Sides Of...
Sex
the Light Side: Missionary Position
the Dark Side: Rough Sex
the WTF! Side: the Montana Mudslide.
Oral Fixations
the Light Side: Breath Mints
the Dark Side: Cigarettes
the WTF! Side: Crack. >.<
Booze
the Light Side: Virgin Margaritas
the Dark Side: Jagerbombs
the WTF! Side: Budweiser and a Roofie
War
the Light Side: Peace and Love, man!
the Dark Side: 0.50 BMG
the WTF! Side: Gang Wars.
Religion
the Light Side: Protestant
the Dark Side: Satanism
the WTF! Side: Westboro Baptist
God
the Light Side: God
the Dark Side: Allah!!!! (boom)
the WTF! Side: Yahweh
Political Parties
the Light Side: Capitalism
the Dark Side: Commies.
the WTF! Side: Al Qaeda
Call of Duty
the Light Side: M16 + Stopping Power
the Dark Side: M14, bitches.
the WTF! Side: n00b tube + Juggernaught
Relationships
the Light Side: Monogamy
the Dark Side: Big Pimpin'!
the WTF! Side: Bestiality.
Male Stars
the Light Side: Allen Rickman
the Dark Side: Al Pacino
the WTF! Side: Al Bundy
Nutrition
the Light Side: Garden Salad and Fat Free Ranch
the Dark Side: 32 oz. Prime Cut
the WTF! Side: Spam.
Organizations
the Light Side: MADD
the Dark Side: NRA
the WTF! Side: PETA
Female Stars
the Light Side: Oprah
the Dark Side: Paris
the WTF! Side: Brittney
Politics
the Light Side: McCain
the Dark Side: Obama
the WTF! Side: G Dubya
In Class
the Light Side: Take Notes
the Dark Side: Write retarded Dark Side, Light Side shit.
the WTF! Side: Use it as TP.
Style
the Light Side: Ties and Polos
the Dark Side: Leather and Studs
the WTF! Side: Assless Chaps
Men's Undies
the Light Side: Briefs
the Dark Side: Boxers
the WTF! Side: Goin' commando
Girls
the Light Side: Natural Blondes
the Dark Side: Asian Brunettes
the WTF! Side: Fire crotch.
Armwear
the Light Side: "Livestrong" Rubber Band
the Dark Side: Spiked Bracer
the WTF! Side: a dozen "Livestrong" Rubber Bands
Jokes
the Light Side: Knock knock...
the Dark Side: What's worse than ten dead babies in a bucket?
the WTF! Side: What's the difference between a jew and a pizza...
Sex Toys
the Light Side: Spermicidal Lube
the Dark Side: Fuzzy Handcuffs
the WTF! Side: Cat o' Nine Tails
Blow Jobs
the Light Side: Spits
the Dark Side: Swallows
the WTF! Side: Snowballin' O.o
Cylindrical Objects
the Light Side: 6" Pencil
the Dark Side: 10" Cock
the WTF! Side: 11.5" Elm and Unicorn Hair
Boobs
the Light Side: 32B
the Dark Side: 38D
the WTF! Side: Training Bra
Sex For
the Light Side: Love
the Dark Side: Lust
the WTF! Side: Neither.
Pussy
the Light Side: Virgin Fresh
the Dark Side: Gently Used
the WTF! Side: Loosey Goosey
Sex
the Light Side: Pill and Wrap
the Dark Side: Fuckin' Natural
the WTF! Side: Four pregnancies in three years.
Main Courses
the Light Side: Tofu
the Dark Side: Turkey
the WTF! Side: Tofurkey
Sexy
the Light Side: Catholic School Girls
the Dark Side: Catholic School Girls
the WTF! Side: the Janitor.
Sex Appropriate...
the Light Side: After marriage
the Dark Side: First Date
the WTF! Side: Being a nun.
Cussing
the Light Side: Darn, dang, shoot, heck, butt
the Dark Side: Fuckshitassdamnbitchmotherfucker!
the WTF! Side: Fuck that shit nigga, 'fo I pop a cap in yo mothafuckin' ass!
The Bases
the Light Side: Bunt to first
the Dark Side: In the park homer
the WTF! Side: Striking out.
Lunch
the Light Side: Subway
the Dark Side: Burger King
the WTF! side: Tofu World
American Football
the Light Side: Niners
the Dark Side: Raiders
the WTF! Side: Football.
Futbol
the Light Side: Soccer
the Dark Side: Football
the WTF! Side: All of the above.
Revenge
the Light Side: Turn the other cheek
the Dark Side: Psychological Assassin
the WTF! Side: Fire Axe
Home
the Light Side: 4 Bedroom house with 3 kids
the Dark Side: 1 Bedroom apartment with a 54" LCD
the WTF! Side: 54" Box with 3 rats.
Mammas
the Light Side: My mamma
the Dark Side: Yo mamma!
the WTF! Side: Nude mamma.
Black Stars
the Light Side: Bill Cosby
the Dark Side: Dave Chappelle
the WTF! Side: Gary Coleman
Consoles
the Light Side: Wii
the Dark Side: 360
the WTF! Side: PS3
Countries
the Light Side: USA
the Dark Side: Iraq
the WTF! Side: France
Piercings
the Light Side: Earring
the Dark Side: Nose Ring
the WTF! Side: Prince Albert
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Runawaythoughts ->> Lots of oddball stuff gets posted here; it's part of what makes the Young Writers Society such a unique site. The YWS administration and staff asks nothing more than that stuff be appropriately rated, as it was here. Of course, with stuff like this, I do keep a closer eye on it. However, we don't make restrictions on what gets posted for several reasons (libertarian ideals, intellectual honesty, yada yada yada).
Asking someone to not post something like this again, though, is not the best thing to say. For one, it's largely unnecessary as most authors only tend to write one piece like this. But for another, it reflects poorly on the person making the suggestion and as you can see from Hunter's response, it does not elicit good reactions. Even from a critique point of view, one of the overall aims of a critique is to get someone to agree with you, and you don't do that by saying "don't post something like this again."
You also want to make sure your spelling is at least somewhat good. It doesn't need to be perfect, but misspelling every other word does detract from your critique.
Anyways, hope that helps you in the future and I look forward to seeing you around more. Please don't take any of this the wrong way! We're all here to help you out.
I know that, but I was wondering how it was relevant, but I am sure it is, hehe!
It may only be funny the first time, but it's funny the first time for those that read it, no? It *is* properly rated R, you'll notice, so anyone under age, such as yourself, that reads it does so at their own risk. forgive me if I disregard your "critique," as there's nothing constructive about it.
By the way...your parody makes no sense.
--Dono
HAHA i find this hilarious. I don't agree with it all but i find it quite funny. Why would you want to post it on young writers society? I have no idea but this has made my day.
cuz its only funny the first time.
)
One WTF is up with you using it as toilet paper. Really? If so thats just messed up.
Well... dont post anything like it again
This review has been completly written by Me
Too bad if your offeneded by it
(^that was my parody of your intro
Aedomir--WTF stands for What The F***: the completely out there side of things that no one in their right mind should ever consider. Ever. Maybe.
Kitty--suggestions? This was really the only format I thought could work.
Rei--I was gonna say that none of the religious stuff should offend...till I remembered my Yahweh one. Unfortunately, that was purely an inside joke in my history class, where my catch phrase during our entire portion on the ancient Hebrews was "Don't f*** with Yahweh!"
As such, I should probably remove that one. The rest are usually satirical in nature, not really attacking anyone of the religion, rather attacking extreme parts of some religions (the Westboro Baptist Church, who picket dead soldiers' funerals with signs reading "God hates fags," and the extremist Muslim groups currently promoting anti-American sentiments world-wide).
Tristan--My thanks! Glad to see someone who shares my twisted sense of humor.
Hahaha, i loved it.
My kind of humor for sure.
Though i am worried - i found myself leaning a bit towards the dark side.
I got a kick out of all the political ones, and the religious ones too.
The sexual ones were delightful as well.
But then again, they always are.
You seemed to have touched on every subject except music! I'm sure you could come up with something great for that catergory.
I really don't know what to think. Some of it is funny. Some of it makes perfect sense. Then other times it is horribly offensive, especially when you touch on religion.
This was great. I laughed pretty hard at most of these. Probably the best part is the sheer randomness of the comparisons. WTF all the way.
This was probably the best one.
No comment XD
Well actually, there is a comment. You have some great material here but maybe it could be presented better? With a bit more variety rather than the same criteria for each topic?
Okay, so I read this really early in the morning and then fell asleep. This gave me THE WEIRDEST DREAM EVER.
With that said, the obscure sexual WTF! stuff was probably the most influential. XD
So, this was really amusing, and I'll probably do something similar in Stat (since I no longer have to use that class to study for flying! Yay!), but I though I'd do a tally of my answers. Here's what I came up with:
Light Side: 19
Dark Side: 20
WTF! Side: 3
Pretty good balance there, I'd say. ^^
I don't really know what this is, or what to take frm it in fact. It was intersting, but I am not sure what the intended point was. Yes, this is an experiment but what for? I don't know what the point of this is, but having said that, I can be very boring at times
I liked:
Futbol
the Light Side: Soccer
the Dark Side: Football
the WTF! Side: All of the above.
I have no idea what it meant but it was wierd!
What is the WTF! Side?
Keep writing! (actually Im not sure that fits lol)
~D'Aedomir~
How very interesting. I do like the comparisons. Man made me laugh, many made my mouth hit my desk in shock. Still, an interesting insight into the wonderful world of Hunter.
I would have rather there be spaces. Jut cause I rather like them more separated and easier to read. Other than that, it's very interesting.
My favorite being....Minus the spelling mistake.