Crysi

Yay! I'm a huge fan of haikus, as they are difficult to pull off well. Plus, they're so much fun to write! :) Anyway, I just have one TINY suggestion. ...

I'd just like to point out a few things. 1. This is a writing website, and by posting on here you give us the right to assume you wish to ...

I'd like to remind everyone to leave CONSTRUCTIVE comments. If you liked it, what did you like about it? If you didn't, why didn't you? And please, no randomness about ...

It's... too simple. In my opinion, poetry should make the reader think. Even if it's only to make the reader appreciate the imagery and think about a similar experience they've ...

To be honest, I disagree with a few of Trident's views, and all of luna's views. But hey, critiquers don't have to agree. ;) “Duck for cover!” Darry yelled through ...

Actually, pandora, many poems are written without punctuation marks, and they're beautiful. It's all how you use it. Gabrielle, this is interesting... yet it seems somewhat bland to me. There's ...

Hmm. This is one of those poems that seems so familiar, yet it still makes you think about the perspective. While I think poems about watching others is overdone, I ...

Let's stick to actual reviews here, folks - it's okay to guess, but keep it as an afterthought. Reviews come first. The title made me laugh - it reminded me ...

Okay. Here are my suggestions: 1. If you're determined to write a rhyming poem, here's a hint - not all words that end in 'less' rhyme. It just gets annoying. ...

Wiggy - Wow, I'm impressed! This poem actually reminds me of a poem I wrote last year that got accepted into the school's literary magazine. I wrote it when I ...

I'll be honest with you, Brad, since you do us the same favor. I didn't like it. I thought it was too messy. Reminded me of a bad cut-up poem, ...

Miyaviloves, I'd like to remind you that this is not a critique on other people's critiques. If you really read Incan's comments, you'll see that he does give constructive criticism. ...

Haha, Wiggy said what I was thinking: Pirates. Just the whole "I can't feel warmth or cold" part, really. I have to admit... As much as I'm a fan of ...

Love it. So many people have experience the disappointment of dreams and sometimes we have to be reminded that it's all part of life. A new dream will come along ...

Gotta make this a quick crit - My teacher would say this was more prose than poetry, and I think I'd have to agree. It would be a really cool ...