Crimsona

Thank you :)

Thank you very much! I definitely need to proof read it and change a few things.

Thank you :)

Thank you :)

I'm honoured that this is the first poem that you have ever liked! It's lovely to hear feedback like that. Thank you very much for your comments and yes the ...

I actually really liked it! Sure, the rhyme scheme wasn't very consistant and it was a little repetitive, but the imagery was really good. I loved its simplicity and freeness. ...

Thank you for your reviews! I've made some edits.

I like these lyrics, a lot. It gets a little repetitive, but because the word choice is nice I think you can get away with it. Very nice. Keep writing ...

Hehehe, South Park rules. I think you might want to put an age restriction on it thought because some of the words are quite rude.

Thank you for your review! :D I have made some changes. :)

Thanks for the reviews :)

Thank you Allikat! :)

Aww, a lovely poem. Really sweet, simple and really enjoyable to read. Just as a poem should be. Keep on writing this gorgeous work, ~Crimsona

Thank you Tenyo! I'll start splitting up the chunky paragraphs. :) I have been thinking about putting it into first person for some chapters and now you've said it I ...

Thanks for the reviews. :)