CreativelyWritten

Thanks so much for the reviews. I am usually very bad at poetry. The only stuff I've done good was for assignments. I was very excited when I was able ...

Thanks for the review. And yes I know I need to spice it up. It's really difficult with this story for some reason- maybe the way I wrote it.

Thanks. I need to fix it... I didn't realize quite how bland it was until I saw all the comments. But that's why I love putting my writing on YWS ...

Thanks for the review. I need to edit the whole story, make the sentences a bit different and all that.

Yeah I knew as I was writing it that it was a bit bland. It was an old story in a notebook that I decided to write onto here. Believe ...

Thanks so much for the review/comment. No this is not a true story, it's made up. Sorry about your story but glad you're safe :) And I have a couple ...

I know what this poem means exactly. I'm sure a lot of us on this site do, as writing often goes hand in hand with reading. I don't really see ...

I really liked it :) short, sweet and to the point.... except at the same time it's deep. It just makes your heart soar..... really great.

I like it so far. Very realistic and such. Plus it leaves you hanging about his whole aversion to going out. One can guess obviously but it's just that, a ...

Cute idea. But unfortunately it flows really weird.

Oh! Haha pretty original :) I thought some of the wording was off and weird... but that's because it's a cell phone. Haha way to go on this, it was ...

I'm sorry about you're friend. That's awfully sad :( On a happier note this is a very well written poem. It really speaks to the heart. It tells a story. ...

Hmm... a very resounding truth in such a simple poem. Although I have to admit it kind of depressed me! Keep writing.

Very... hmm mundane. But in a good way. It shows that everybody is normal in a way.... have similar thoughts. I like that you came up with your own species. ...

*speechless