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Re: Collection of Poetry
I don't really know how to help you at all with these so I can't give you a review. :( Also partially helped on by the fact that I don't ...
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: Holy Breath
Your writing is extraordinarily written. Your words are filled with passion and so much feeling. I would love to give you constructive criticism but unfortunately your prose led me to ...
Feb 26, 2016 -
Re: Secrets
I wasn't trying to assume you were being rude. I just always assume I'm annoying everybody
Feb 10, 2016 -
Re: Secrets
I was just wondering. I wasn't trying to one up you or anything... But I truly loved this story.
Feb 9, 2016 -
Re: Afraid
This was a really great piece that was relatable. I want to write. I try to write. I write in vain when I know that I have no ideas. My ...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: -=The Sorting Hat=-
No surprise here: I'm a Hufflepuff
Mar 31, 2015 -
Re: The Most Dramatic of Exits
Short yet powerful. Way to go
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: Don't Catch Me
Congratulations on your first post and welcome to YWS! Loved the poem... but don't really have anything to fix. The last two lines were my absolute favorite... It's almost like ...
Nov 11, 2014 -
Re: Biting Thoughts
Thanks! Marcy is my absolute favorite AT character.... I'm glad you think I'm a skilled poet! In all reality, I have a very difficult time with poetry.
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Biting Thoughts
Thanks for the review! As much as I love writing, punctuation isn't always my strong point. And neither is poetry so the two mixed together... Ugh
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Biting Thoughts
Thanks. And again, I love your profile picture :)
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Biting Thoughts
Thanks so much :D
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Sweet Addiction
Thanks :) and I love your profile picture
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Sweet Addiction
Thanks :)
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Sweet Addiction
Decision and decision aren't the rhyming lines haha. It's you and true. Thanks for the review
Nov 10, 2014
