Creativeatheart

Nice chapter :3 Content: 10 out of 10. I noticed the bit of increase in description and the name he chose for the guy made me laugh! LOL And finally ...

Hey again :3 Here to review Content: 9 out of 10 this time because like Sourdude16 says, you seemed to be holding back on the level of description but other ...

Here to review :3 Thanks for your review btw Content: I'll give your content 10 out of 10 because you gave just the right amount of information to keep the ...

LOL what made you come up this poem? It is definately orginal I'll give you that. I enjoyed reading it and nice touch about the silent fart XD The last ...

Here to review XD Content: For content I'm going to give you a 8 out of 10 because the story itself is nice but I feel that you could put ...

I loved it and nice elephant btw lol But it looks confusing to read at first glance. So consider spacing in between lines a little AS we are born we ...

I like this poem as I do all of your works but this one seems a little rushed in my opinion. I would rewrite- Gentle words run down your face ...

I enjoyed this, it was neatly written in my opinion and very easy to read. It was also a little humorous and made me laugh a bit especially when he ...

This is a very dark piece and don't really read poetry very often but I enjoyed it which is saying something :3 First off Sionarama, I would really consider spacing ...

The Senryu itself is fine except one thing- it's pretty short :3 considering the topic I, as a reader, would insist that you would extend a little bit more xD ...

Oh one more thing I might add- Space out your writing, at least a little bit. That kind of really does matter because words that are too close are a ...

"I know the way I see the world without it is worth every minute lost, thinks the young lord, though he accepts the glass from his butler's hand." I would ...