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Dusky i am seriously going to bottle your talent soon, your an amazingly talented writer! Honestly, right up there with all my favorite published people :D This is so cool ...

Everybody's already said everything i wanted to say! It just isnt fair. Anyway, without turning this thread into a massive debate i would like to point on to the few ...

I'm torn! no its not your peice i love that! its just the fact that I hate reading stuff with great, perfect guys in it cause it makes me start ...

I really did like this. “Amala, come back!” he cried after her, but it was too late. The moment he knew she was out of sight he began to laugh. ...

Wow suburbia in New Zealand must be different. I love living in the suburbs, we have BBQ with neighbors and street party's and great stuff! but anyway I'm off track, ...

theres not much else i could say that hasnt been said already *stamps feet a little* not fair! but i do really want to read more, definatly reasoning for the ...

OK firstly i second what everybodys said, including Firestarter. You need to give it a little time before you expect people to reply. Log off the computer if you have ...

it was pretty cool. Nice job I like a poem that's hard to understand as it might mean something different to different kinds of persons. I back that up completly, ...

ok now im scared, extreamly. That was um, scary and vivid. And yes, well it was er different. No once you get past the sick humour of it all its ...

there were a few little typos...Lol! says the queen of typos...but other than that i think its pretty good, its just i was a little confussed when it started and ...

ok, im pretty bad at criting in general and when it comes to poems man! but just cause you asked i thought i should write something :D I really liked ...

alright im going to be competly honest with you, that scared me s***less! wow, its late at night and Im home alone and i just read that and now ive ...

Your description is wonderful, it paints a picture but i do have one issue. It was only mid-evening but already the sun had gone to sleep and the night sky ...

thats computer doesnt like me going on some websites, like this one. it allways kicks up a stink and disconects if im on msn at the same time...strange things they ...

how sad the human race must be! or maybe its the writers of this world....i cant beleive i laughed at the end! poor wittle birdy! but honestly that was fantasic, ...