Corvus

I do plan on continuing this story and explaining more of the nuances of the universe. To answer some of your questions, Kiran is nonbinary and uses They/Them pronouns. The ...

I love this poem, it is very sweet. I noticed a punctuation error. the comma in "The miles between us, are just proof that we can make this work" is ...

Vermillion is the name of a shade of red. thanks for the review!

ok. review time. (sorry if you take this as an insult, I only mean it as constructive criticism to help improve your future works) "That one day where every emotion ...

Hi! I am not very good at reviewing, but I will try. The first thing I notice is the length. I feel like this is just a beginning of a ...

Corvus Queen stopping by to say this poem is lovely

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sorry i am not very good at writing reviews. I like this poem. it has some pretty deep figurative language, whether you intended it to or not. a good example ...

Thanks for the review! you left some good advice ps. I put a bit of my soul into everything I write.

thank you for the review! you made some really good points! Anthropomorphised hippos were thought of by my five-year-old self and drawn in some crappy homemade comic books.

last names become a theme i the story line. a character discovers their lineage and it is overall important.

for your first point, I actually got that name from a name generator!

this is a great poem, but it seems underdramatized for what it is about. I recommend you separate the stanzas and add more punctuation and powerful words.