Corvus

I like this poem immensely, but there are a few things I noticed. "it never flows but s- stutters" this is a good line, but I would add a "t" ...

Review time! I love the basic premise and the phrasing, but I noticed a couple things. "throughout the school answer changed drastically and sometimes I wonder....what would my answer be ...

ok. review time. (sorry if you take this as an insult, I only mean it as constructive criticism to help improve your future works) "That one day where every emotion ...

I love this poem. the only potential issue I can see is the use of a lot of redundant words. now the fun part: analyzing so one thing I want ...

sorry i am not very good at writing reviews. I like this poem. it has some pretty deep figurative language, whether you intended it to or not. a good example ...

Hi! I am not very good at reviewing, but, to be totally honest a need points. "The air was cool on his warm skin, for dusk had passed already hours ...

ok, so I am not good at reviews. to be honest, i just need the points. here goes nothing. "And it leaves your mind spinning, round and round -like gears ...

Hi! I am pretty bad at reviewing, but your story is good and I need points to post a new work. sooooo, here goes nothing! "the after math of an ...

I love the story, but I found paragraph ten to be a bit... odd. "The furnace thundered again and red-liquid burst from the mountain. It splashed down the ground around ...

hi, I am not a good reviewer, but you followed me so I guess I will help you. the first paragraph seems like an info dump. if this is that ...

hi! I am not very good at reviewing but I will try. (also I have people looking for the next chapter that I can't afford to post, soooooo) first of ...

Hi! This is the first review I have ever made, but here goes nothing! so, the only real thing I noticed is that the second sentence seems a bit hard ...