Corvus

I like this essay. I have never read this book, but now I kind of want to! I am unable to find any grammatical errors in this essay so hats ...

this is a great piece! although I almost hesitate to call it a poem, despite the lovely rhyme scheme, no, this is more like a dramatic monologue from a play. ...

I really like this! the poem is broken up in a way that makes sense and the parts all connect in a nice way. I like the use of commas ...

this is a very cute story. I like how simplistic the style is. Writing an adorable short story with 7 words is not an easy thing to do, and you ...

I really like this poem. I enjoy how structureless it is, really leaving it open to interpretation. your use of punctuation is commendable, the only thing I noticed is a ...

wow. this is absolutely beautiful. I must admit, this is my favorite type of writing, like seeing someone else mind. I find this to be an absolutely fascinating concept. you ...

this is a promising start for a story. I like the way you didn't explain everything, and how you wrote it with vague details and imagery. it makes it more ...

this poem has a very unique feeling, perfectly encapsulating that liminal feeling of the late night. I noticed that you didn't capitalize your "I"s and I would almost recommend leaving ...

this is a very creative poem. I like that you never actually mentioned bleach in the poem, yet the title still ties in so well. here are some things I ...

nice another stream of consciousness essay! these are my favorite. I like the tone of this piece, it is very sad and lost sounding. I have to say, I can ...

this poem is great. I like your usage of rare words like "dalliance" and "tenebrosity". they really give the work a lovely feel. I few things I noticed: "and my ...

this is an absolutely beautiful piece. I have read many of you're poems and noticed you are good at creating a sort of melancholy hope in your work. you are ...

This poem is both lovely and sad. there is much raw power behind the words and enough of a buildup to make a mic-drop at the end feel warranted. here ...

hey, Mage! here to review your piece. overall, this is an amazing poem. you can really feel the emotion you are trying to convey. I have to say, as a ...

this is a lovely poem, I like the way you use figurative language. I am unsure if the lack of punctuation is intentional, but it makes the poem I bit ...