Corncob

I really liked it! It was excellent! Awesome metaphors and descriptions. I really enjoyed reading the second stanza, it had very interesting lines, especially //the slits of your eyes deep ...

Hey, interesting rhyming. After your simple but secure "argument", I pretty much agree. I mean, not specifying my gender, but yeah. This was short, seemingly random, and simple, yet mind ...

Holy crap. This is beautiful. Omigod. I love it. i love it. i love it. this is the best piece of writing I have ever witnessed in my life. Keep ...

Well, that was dark. But good writing. And rhyming. the rhyming excelled the work actually. if one attempted to write a poem like this without rhyme, it would be quite ...

So yeah, I'm too lazy to give constructive criticism, so I'm basically going to do what TakeThatYouFiend did. I loved the line where you said "let's teach paper butterflies to ...

I can't believe this doesn't have more likes! The rhyming is great, and the words I thought would be cheesy, but are actually heartfelt and original! Often times when people ...

Very funny ending! I think that was my favorite part; the ending. Very clever, but not quite what I was expecting. I thought this would be about your irritation of ...

Ooh, very good! I really liked was very interesting, and the ending was spectacular. these lines were my faves: i threw the rotten fruit in the bin/i thought of our ...