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Hi Pretz! (Tell me if you dislike that nickname, otherwise I will continue to use it.) I will try my best not to give the same advice as given before, ...

This poem makes me cry. Not out of pity for you, but empathy. errgh I admit, when I clicked on this poem, I did not expect its theme to be ...

Hello pretz! is that nickname cool with you As you know, I am trying to push myself to review more, so here ya go. I can sense how awesome it ...

Hey, ChocolateCello can I call you VanillaViolin . I can see why this is featured. It's direct, simple, and yet complex when you read into it. I don't have much ...

Hey, this is hilarious and awesome and I love it :D I've just got one suggestion. I get that the whole point was to make this grammatically incorrect and to ...

Feelings I got from this: Vague. Very vague. And loosely spiritual in a way that transcends me. I may be completely off mark here, but the key you were talking ...

Abortion. Ok, I'm going to set my review up like this: Actual poetry constructive criticism first, then my personal opinion on this poem and its theme. *rubs hands together* Mommy ...

Aunt Thundahhhh (I'm not sure why I felt the need to write "Thunder" like that, but there you go.) A storm rages like a drunken aunt-- Haha, I absolutely love ...

Here as promised! Quite a while ago No way this is the best idea you have.” This sentence feels clunky and hard to understand. I suggest rephrasing. If I don’t ...

Hi lakegirls, First off, I like the simplicity of this. It has a nice tell-not-show feel, which I feel works in this situation. However, this being the case, I didn't ...

First we see a featured piece called Okay, and then I am not okay! Okay seems to be a popular word, understandably. I definitely understand where this poem is coming ...

I really just agree with everything EternalRain said in terms of critiques. Honestly, your poem hit the nail on the head. Saying "no offense" is one of the dumbest phrases ...

Hey madisonfrevert, Wow, this is awesome! I totally see why it's featured. It has great rhyming, spectacular flow, and cool imagery. Outstanding job! I like how this wasn't just about ...

I agree with everything Gravity said below. The Nazis were ruthless killers--very little of them are known to feel pity or regret for what they did. They really believed what ...

Very nice--short and sweet. My favorite part about this was the imagery. However, I feel as if you could have been more expansive with it. The first two lines are ...