CorianderLee

Sorry my work schedule has been all over the place, but I have Monday off and that it when I will work on it %u2312.%u2312 I just didn't want you ...

I can go through a few paragraphs and rewrite and example and i'll post it here. :)

lol Semi colleen ^-^

Thanks for the review! This isn't a chapter. It's all I had written because I'm stuck and wasn't sure if I should keep going.

These are the kind of short stories I love. So much feeling! my heart is still hurting. You're an excellent writer, I couldn't find anything to correct! I'll definitely be ...

Oh no I agree with you quite a lot. When I write poetry I just go by look and flow.

Ok I see ^-^ Then yes, that would be theism.

Thanks a lot for the review! I know it's pretty rough xP And thank your for pointing out the bumps! We really haven't learned anything about the character yet because ...

@joe Hi there I have a, well I don't really know what to call it. A question? a Statement? (God forbid) an opinion? Just know that I do not look ...

This was great! I think it flowed perfectly. Now when you said this: My eyes upon his shell were green, green that it was not me. I figured you mean ...

Oh my gosh. this was amazing! You are a great writer. For a while I forgot I was on YWS I thought I was reading a published book on my ...

thank you! I know what you mean when I originally wrote out the story it was about 2000 words. I have a 400 word limit so I had to cut ...

thank you very much :D

This remind me of my anxiety. When I read it through it sound anxious and worried. I love it! This is the feeling I try to convey with my poems. ...

Thank you ^_^ With this having such a small word limit I figured I should work on their background more than their looks. It's important that Fae has been around ...