ConfusedGlasses

Its been a while since I read something you wrote Alchy! It fees so homely. It's really convenient to be using nouns like Old Man and Boy. Gives tButlerambiguous feel. ...

Hey Noelle! Just came across thos in the green room and thought I'd give it a try. I mist admit that I haven't read the chapters before and i pretty ...

Hey there! Just read this piece of work. I find this very fascinating and the imagery you used was extraordinary. Hats off to you. I hope I can write like ...

Once again, a perfect chapter. I really like how the story is coming out. And the suspense. God! It's obvious that there was very good planning behind this. One thing ...

Wonderful and delightful chapter. Very fascinating. I really like how the descriptions come out. It's really nice, the imagery. The way you bring out the significance of RED. And Charm's ...

Hey! Here for a review Silvy (f you don't mind me calling you that)! So, I haven't read the previous chapters, of which there are nine more, plus a prologue. ...

Back to review chapter 1 for you! This chapter clarifies some things. It appears that Charm is a girl. It is still not obvious what the romantic paring is. But ...

Hi there! Dropped in for a review! I actually clicked on chapter 1, but then saw that it had a prologue. It would be unfair to judge chapter 1 without ...

Okay, so it was very, shall I say, brave of you to come up with an idea like this, in my opinion at least. And, I must say that you ...

That is a wonderful chapter. Not very eventful, but wonderful. And Happy Birthday, by the way! So, this chapter is sort of like something that helps to get off of ...

Okay. Now I see that you more of a tragedy writer than you are a humor writer. It is sort of sad. But trust me you could do better by ...

Alrighty! Didn't think I could make it *phew*. Anyway, moving on to the review. Okay, let me just mention something before I get down to it [qoute]dressed to the nines ...

Hey! Long time no see! Wait... I just commented on your previous chapter... This is so... I don't know what to say... I would expect that something this serious would ...

I would start my review with a congratulations but the mood just sets it off. This is another chapter well done no doubt. And I have to say, in the ...

I have to say you have a thing for writing suspense, sister. I read the title and I was like, "nonononononononononononononononononononono what the heck!" Yup. And the way you describe ...