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Commando588

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Lone Soul Chapter 2: part two

    oops :D

    Apr 11, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Everytime I look at You

    I liked it! Especially the last couple of lines.

    Apr 9, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Some Where Out There

    IT was cool! I don't now how to correct poems but other wise it was good! The second to last line i think had a spelling error.

    Apr 9, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Color Blue

    :)

    Mar 31, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Monster

    Wow, that was really well but together. Its really sad, thought. Some people really have to go through that stuff. I feel sorry for them. Anywho, you did an excelent ...

    Mar 27, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Worthy of Love

    Ok! Well, lets start witht he dates. I know it might sound confusing, but maybe if i explained myself a little you guys could help some more to make it ...

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: A lone soul Chapter two

    Please review!

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Story w/o a name! Very short...

    AHHHHHHH!!!!! awesome.

    Mar 14, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Adventures In My Mind ::Introduction Revised::

    Weird...But good!

    Mar 6, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Assassin story!

    Cool! I dont really knew what else to say... Oh, ya! Like the guy above me said, what time fram is this in?

    Mar 6, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: A lone soul Chapter two

    Thanks!

    Mar 3, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Earth is small

    It was good! cute, but short...When your sister gets older tell her to write more, she has an awesome start!

    Jan 29, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Accident

    Wow...that was offence though! Your doing excelent!

    Jan 27, 2008


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