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  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Green Life Valley, Chapter 1

    Thank you! :)

    May 7, 2014
  • Other » Other, Narrative Re: Cuntry House

    You are vary right! I think it just shocked me a little. but over all it was good writing. So good job :)

    Mar 26, 2014
  • Other » Other, Narrative Re: Cuntry House

    ummm wrong website buddy...

    Mar 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why?

    This piece was very good. I couldn't tell if it was meant to be serious or silly, though. But I saw the limitation the character felt and could relate. It ...

    Mar 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Barbecue

    This was great writing! You could hear and feel the panic and fear in the main character's voice. I also liked how they were twins because twins always look out ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Health Re: Paper

    I loved it! But when I saw "The evolution of Depression" I knew what type of story it would be. It was depressing and sad to read but I liked ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Humor Re: The Soul Collector

    I loved it! I liked your choice of words. I love to read work that has meaning to it. Death is something everyone thinks about in some point of their ...

    Feb 18, 2014


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