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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Second Always Comes Last: Handshake

    Hey, To start off I'm not entirely sure what the whole 4 thing at the top was about, care to explain? Aside from that however my first read through of ...

    Feb 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 5.2

    Hey, Whats up? Cool, same thing here. I'm cross dressing today so there's that. Otherwise it's been a pretty uneventful day. I really enjoyed your story however, it was well ...

    Feb 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: TFoA - Chapter 5 (Part 1 of 2) REVISED

    Hey, I've really enjoyed this story so far, I think it's great you summarize the story in the beginning for those who haven'y had the chance to read the previous ...

    Feb 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Shade Users - Chapter 3 (1/2)

    Hey, This has been a great little story so far, and I've enjoyed it thoroughly. You seem to have a grasp on punctuation is helpful (I'm just a poet mainly ...

    Feb 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 4

    Hey, This is a fun little story to read, I enjoyed reading it. Especially after having to publicly speak, I'm not overly fond of public speaking honestly. So this was ...

    Feb 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Fanfiction Re: An Open Book

    Hey, This was a fun little story to read. It distracted me from the awful day I've been having so thanks for that. Onto the review however, I think you ...

    Feb 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: ​Nymphs - Part Two

    Hey, Yet another 5th period review, yay! Sadly the trimester is almost over so I'll have to find a new time to do this. *Sigh* oh well, I'll live... I ...

    Feb 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Literature Re: The Second Reason I left

    Hey, My hands are cold, so typing is kinda hard right now but I'm trying so hopefully I don't mess this up to badly. I think this is a really ...

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Revised Prologue of Redemption

    Hey, Nice little story, it always makes me happy to see when authors take the tine to go back and revise their work. Surprisingly not a lot of people bother ...

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 15

    Hey, This was a fun little story to read and review. I think you did a really good job with this story, and in my opinion reviewing well written story's ...

    Jan 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Crazy Little Love Story (4) Rumor Has It

    Hey, First I think a celebration is in order, this is my 100th review. I never thought I'd stay with this site long enough to see this day. But here ...

    Jan 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Oddball Object {1}

    Hey, Okay, I admit I was expecting some random poorly written piece of writing. While I was reading this I was trying so hard not to laugh in the dead ...

    Jan 29, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Ode to Forgotten Memories and the Drive Home

    Hey, This was really interesting to read. It conveys a lot of different emotions and story's all rolled into one. Right off the bat I noticed you didn't indent the ...

    Jan 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 1

    Hey, I'm feeling stabby today so, I decided the best course of action was to focus on writing reviews. I guess we'll see how well this works out. Starting off ...

    Jan 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 44

    Hey, I haven't typed a review in awhile *Cracks Knuckles* so this should be fun! Right off the bat I want to congratulate you on your story so far, it's ...

    Jan 27, 2015


'Hush, hush!' I whispered; 'people can have many cousins and of all sorts, Miss Cathy, without being any the worse for it; only they needn't keep their company, if they be disagreeable and bad.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights