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Re: The Daughter of War - Chapter 30: To Look Inside a Heart
Woahhhhhhhh that was like Rick Riordian wrote that himself!! That was awesome even though I haven’t read any of the other chapters! I really felt for Josephine and I felt ...
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Re: Why do I have to love you? (Denise’s song) (reprise)
This is beautiful even if I don’t know the story! The woman is in a state of confusion but in a state of realisation and guilt too, this short piece ...
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Re: Act Two: envelopes envelop my eyes
Woahhhhhhh, Coffee here and I’m absolutely blown away!! It was so hard to read in the beginning and my eyes were basically on fire but I managed!! Yes! Now, grab ...
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Re: Act One: pacts left unbroken
WOW @herbalhour and @Spearmint!! This is so awesome, detailed and intricately put together! I love how there are different sections and how it’s carefully moulded-it seems old for some reason-ancien
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Re: Wishful
OML, isn’t it uncanny that I always thought like this?! I haven’t lost anyone in my life(that is close to me) YET but god’s mercy but I always do this ...
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Re: merciful -- animated
Woahhhhh this is so creative!!! I wish I could do stuff like this but I’m helplessly dumb and I am so lazy(hehe). I love how the writing “feels” and how ...
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Re: Series of Disorientation
Woahhhh, short and simple but so powerful and meaningful! It’s so cool how you gave so many examples and the emotion in the poem is really…dismal almost and gives vibes ...
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Re: Jesus Christ
Oh wow, I’m not Christian myself but the emotion in this poem is chilling to the bone-it’s so raw with emotion that I felt my throat get dry and my ...
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Re: Shattered Gravity - Part 1 「𖤓」
Woahhhh, love this! It’s amazing, descriptive and imaginative! I love how much detail you’ve put in there and how you have kept some suspense but not too much that the ...
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Re: Whispers from yester(decade)
Woah. This one was honestly a HUGE change of genre! Amazing work, once again! I love how the death of his friends was so sudDeN and unexpected. Additionally, the suspense ...
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Re: Lost souls
Coffee here! First of all, WOW. I’ve decided, I lovee ALL of your stories every single one. This is amazing!! I love how Death is portrayed exactly as I pictured ...
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Re: Prophecy's call - World-building
Wow Cupid, you’ve really outdone yourself! This is actually amazing, I love this so much!! I love especially all the food descriptions-I just woke up and now I really want ...
Feb 24, 2024 -
Re: Why do you hate me?
Oh gosh I love this a lot, it’s like the character is afraid of the person they hate becoming them and having to go through everything they went through-their trauma, ...
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Re: Please.. Just look my way
Woooow @AJW you really know how to touch someone’s heart! This is wonderful and really emotional I could picture you writing a book that moves someone to tears very well! ...
Feb 22, 2024 -
Re: All I could think to say was "You"
Oooohhh I love this so much! You have so much talent honestly it would be amazing if I walked in a bookstore and saw you had written a book!! This ...
Feb 22, 2024
