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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Chasing Dragons: Chapter One

    Hi there Stella 1. What did you like the most in the story Stella is that “Where’s the princess?” Even the trees seemed to be asking one another the question. ...

    May 9, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: Just One More (2/2)

    Hi there Stella 1. What did i like the most in the story Stella is that The first course was leek and potato soup. Nathaniel had appeared, claiming that he ...

    May 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Just One More (1/2)

    Hi there Stella 1. What did i like the most in the story Stella is that Thank the gods for Nathaniel. As Charlie saddled his horse, Monty, he remembered how ...

    May 9, 2022
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Princess and the Knight: A Fable

    Hi there Elinor 1. What did i like the most in the story Elinor Very long ago, in a faraway land, there was a princess. She was beautiful in every ...

    May 9, 2022
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Locust King

    Hi there Elinor, 1. What did i like the most in the story Elinor Jane sighed, closing her eyes. The hint was too broad. Ever since day one of the ...

    May 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: The Castle 2.2

    Hi there Elinor, 1. What I liked the most in the story Elinor was that “Oh,” said Lisa quietly. “Well, um, that’s fine. Just do what you need to do ...

    May 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: The Castle 2.1

    Hi Ellinor, 1. What did i like the most in the story Elinor is that When Dorothy walked into the grocery store, she knew it was going to be a ...

    May 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: The Castle 1.2

    Hi Elinor, 1. What did i like the most in the story Elinor is that Dorothy took a deep breath. “I doubt I got it. Besides, I’m sure they’ve called ...

    May 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: The Castle 1.1

    Hi Elinor, First off Elinor my suggestions was the poem was alright and everything but its really good through and let me tell you why through Elinor It was 7:36 ...

    Mar 30, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Under the Apple Tree - 1 (Revised)

    Hi Elinor, First off Elinor my suggestions was the poem was alright and everything but it's really good through and let me tell you why it was alright in the ...

    Mar 28, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: .

    Hi Stellar, First off Stellar my suggestions was the poem was alright and everything but its really good through and let me tell you why it was alright in the ...

    Mar 28, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Out of Sight

    Hi Hkumar, First off Hkumar my suggestion was Hkumar the poem was alright hkumar but really its a vibe poem and let me tell you why hkumar the secret flowers ...

    Mar 14, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: You Think Me a Woman

    Hi almost. First off almost my suggestion was almost the poem was alright and everything but it was good almost and i wanna tell you almost in the poem So ...

    Mar 14, 2022
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Madness

    Hi WinnyWriter, First off WinntWriter my suggestions was the poem was alright and everything but its really good through and let me tell you why it was alright in the ...

    Mar 14, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: a list of drinks in my room.

    Hi lillianna, First off lillianna my suggestion was lillianna the poem was alright and everything but its really bad that you drinking so much like that lillianna I wanna tell ...

    Mar 14, 2022


“If lightning is the anger of the gods, then the gods are concerned mostly about trees.”
— Lao Tzu