ClariceArrais

Thank you so much for your review. If you want to take a look again, I made some changes. What do you think of it? About the questions: I received ...

Thanks! ^^ I am learning a lot with the reviews. I wrote a little too formal because of the story background, in the other umpublished chapters , when he's with ...

Thank you very much for your patience. I noticed I have a problem with "so", I use it too much. In Portuguese, we have to use brackets, this is a ...

^^ We'll get there. =)

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^^ I liked it very much. =)

^^ OMG! It's still midnight where I live, but I'm happy I could make your day brighter. ^^

I'm brazilian, I know what you mean.^^ Following in 3, 2, 1... =)

OMG. Thanks so much. I really hope you have enjoyed. I didn't think I was good with poetry. I'll try more again later. ^^

I thought of the counting as the killer counting, running away from the scene, his heart and mind racing together; but trying to keep calm. That's why the countig increased ...

I like the way you take us from one mood to another. It's simple, but so deep. I just remembered few years ago when I found out I had sincope, ...

I agree with @icannothearthings about the numbering, but I have to say: it was simple and amusing. I don't know if it's because I've been there, but I instantly connected ...

I liked the way you told us this story. The progression of the everyday persistance of not giving up on the girl. The way the girl started changing, accepting there ...