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Re: Lost
Hi there! Arden here to leave you a review! Let's get started. I feel so lost We go this way, and that But we do not know the cost I ...
Nov 5, 2018 -
Re: Shine
Hey there! I'm Arden, here to leave you a review! Let's go ahead and jump right into the details!! I could see it all happening, but I couldn’t control it. ...
Nov 5, 2018 -
Re: My friend and the motive
Hey there! Arden here to leave you a review! Let's go ahead and jump right onto it. I stood there. Outside, drenched in rain. I couldn't tell you why I ...
Nov 4, 2018 -
Re: Sorry
Hey there, Arden here to leave you a review! Let's go ahead and dive right in. This poem sort of wraps up the main aspects of regret and guilt that ...
Nov 4, 2018 -
Re: everything's burning
Hey there, sound! Arden here to leave you a review. Let's jump right into it! (Also, unfortunately, the link to your song didn't work :( . I'm sure you sang ...
Oct 30, 2018 -
Re: ​Prologue
Hey, there! Arden here to review your work. (I find analyzing pieces from top to bottom more efficient, so let's do that!) Saylene was once a happy star where the ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: A young spy and a young cop Chapter 2
Hello, there! Arden here to review your work! [I find it easier to review pieces from top to bottom to analyze them more efficiently, so let's do that!] "You are ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: Browning
Hey there! Arden here to drop you a review. I don't have much criticism for this piece, so instead of reviewing it how I usually would, I'm going to write ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: Crazy Dream
Hello there, and welcome to YWS! I'm Arden, and I'm here to leave you a review! [I find it easier analyzing works from top to bottom so my comments aren't ...
Oct 23, 2018 -
Re: Mess
Hey there! Arden here to leave you a review! (I find it easier to analyze pieces from top to bottom in order to get everything that may be helpful to ...
Aug 9, 2018 -
Re: Prologue
Hello there! Arden here to leave you a review! (I find it easier to analyze pieces from top to bottom in order to get everything that may be helpful to ...
Aug 9, 2018 -
Re: The Valen: Chapter 1.2
Hi, 'reena! Arden here to leave a review. (I find it easier to analyze pieces from top to bottom in order to get everything on the table more efficiently, so ...
Jul 15, 2018 -
Re: Does Dragon Meat Even Taste Good? - 1 (LMS)
Hey there. Arden here to review your work. I've found the best way to review pieces is to analyze them from top to bottom, so let's begin by doing that. ...
Jul 4, 2018 -
Re: The day you decide
Hi there! I'm Arden, here to review your poem! As the previous reviewer stated, I did enjoy as well the mysterious feel/mood surrounding this piece. It does let my mind ...
Jul 4, 2018 -
Re: a reflection
Hi there! Arden here to review your work. I did enjoy this. Even though it was less (in your words) "your story" and more of a reflection, I still found ...
Jul 4, 2018
