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  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Lost

    Hi there! Arden here to leave you a review! Let's get started. I feel so lost We go this way, and that But we do not know the cost I ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Narrative Re: Shine

    Hey there! I'm Arden, here to leave you a review! Let's go ahead and jump right into the details!! I could see it all happening, but I couldn’t control it. ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: My friend and the motive

    Hey there! Arden here to leave you a review! Let's go ahead and jump right onto it. I stood there. Outside, drenched in rain. I couldn't tell you why I ...

    Nov 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Sorry

    Hey there, Arden here to leave you a review! Let's go ahead and dive right in. This poem sort of wraps up the main aspects of regret and guilt that ...

    Nov 4, 2018
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: everything's burning

    Hey there, sound! Arden here to leave you a review. Let's jump right into it! (Also, unfortunately, the link to your song didn't work :( . I'm sure you sang ...

    Oct 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: ​Prologue

    Hey, there! Arden here to review your work. (I find analyzing pieces from top to bottom more efficient, so let's do that!) Saylene was once a happy star where the ...

    Oct 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A young spy and a young cop Chapter 2

    Hello, there! Arden here to review your work! [I find it easier to review pieces from top to bottom to analyze them more efficiently, so let's do that!] "You are ...

    Oct 28, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Browning

    Hey there! Arden here to drop you a review. I don't have much criticism for this piece, so instead of reviewing it how I usually would, I'm going to write ...

    Oct 28, 2018
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Crazy Dream

    Hello there, and welcome to YWS! I'm Arden, and I'm here to leave you a review! [I find it easier analyzing works from top to bottom so my comments aren't ...

    Oct 23, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mess

    Hey there! Arden here to leave you a review! (I find it easier to analyze pieces from top to bottom in order to get everything that may be helpful to ...

    Aug 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Prologue

    Hello there! Arden here to leave you a review! (I find it easier to analyze pieces from top to bottom in order to get everything that may be helpful to ...

    Aug 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Valen: Chapter 1.2

    Hi, 'reena! Arden here to leave a review. (I find it easier to analyze pieces from top to bottom in order to get everything on the table more efficiently, so ...

    Jul 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Does Dragon Meat Even Taste Good? - 1 (LMS)

    Hey there. Arden here to review your work. I've found the best way to review pieces is to analyze them from top to bottom, so let's begin by doing that. ...

    Jul 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The day you decide

    Hi there! I'm Arden, here to review your poem! As the previous reviewer stated, I did enjoy as well the mysterious feel/mood surrounding this piece. It does let my mind ...

    Jul 4, 2018
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: a reflection

    Hi there! Arden here to review your work. I did enjoy this. Even though it was less (in your words) "your story" and more of a reflection, I still found ...

    Jul 4, 2018


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