ClackFlip

Hi Timmy! no emotions conflicted with the lives played out before him I was going to make a Transformers joke here, but it wouldn't make sense. And where she’d gone ...

First off, I apologize profusely for taking so long to review this. I have no excuses, so wiggle your finger disapprovingly at me. Not that one Timmy. There's a good ...

Hey Timmy! Sorry it took me so long to get around to this, School just started up for me again, so I've been understandably busy adjusting. And being lazy. BUT ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I hope your having a good and fun time. Let's review your work! I'm not going to go into too much detail here, seeing as there's ...

Hey Maddy! Here to review :3 They started a fire. The woman knew the end was near. This is a bit sloppy, there's no correlation between the two trains of ...

Hi Labrador! Thanks for pinging me up for this one! Sorry I took so long to get around to it. because - I passed the wall and saw the cloth ...

Alright, let me start out with a bit of a disclaimer. I'm not complaining about your grammar. These aren't nitpicks. They don't matter. What I am going to complain about ...

I hate to sound like a broken record, but wow. The whole reading process was just a blast and I didn't want to slow down to think. That in itself ...

Clack here again, representing the water team! To reviewing! This chapter shares some major fixes that the last one needed. You don't bog us down with too much information, there's ...

On behalf of the Water Tribe (which are WAY better than the other newbies. We had Katara.) I bring to you... a review. (Cue the triumphant music!) If one link ...

PYROK!!!!!!!!!!! I still love Pyrok. She so cool. To reviewing! Because I really wanted to read this. a brilliant blue. I'm not quite sure what you meant here. Was the ...

Today I seem to be hitting a gold mine of well written pieces, and this one is by far the most gripping. The characters are psychotic and wonderful. Your protagonists ...

A'right pardner, let's fix some story problems! So you set the scene The lands were grass plains that unfolded and rolled forever. Gently the wind passed over the tall grass, ...

Back again! I enjoyed the cliffhanger of the last so I just jumped into this one. all his eyebrows were raised All sixteen of them? Anyway, let me explain some ...

*Takes off monacle and sets down glass of Snooty Scotch (that's actually just apple juice) That was good. I honestly think it was well written and executed pretty well. It ...