Chupatoasta

Hey there~! I like this story, I really do. It seems to have good flow through the chapters, as well as a positive plot. However, unfortunately, there are more things ...

Oh my Lord... You've officially done it, you've officially drawn me into this story. As a matter of fact, the first two sentences drew me in immediately. This looks to ...

First of all, I want to tell you that I absolutely love anything to do with Erin Hunter's books, whether it be Warriors or Seekers, any fanfiction instantly draws me ...

Oh. My. God. Well since Kaedee practically dissected the beginning of your story, I really don't have anything to critique on~! But, I will say this; I absolutely love your ...

Oh. My. Gosh. I absolutely love this! And your adorable sound cat-characters! *huggles Eaglefeather* Truthfully, I didn't find anything wrong with this! All your grammar seems to be perfect, to ...

Hi~~! Teehee :D I have to say, that I love this. I really do.(: It's short, but I found it funny and cute! Anyway, I don't really have anything bad ...

Hello New One(: Haha, I have to agree with Brom, this is very, very, very random. However, just cause it made me laugh, don't think I'm going to skip on ...

Hey Emoticon, Chupatoasta here!(: Wow... I think this was great. Short, but great!(: It really tells a lot in a couple stanzas. Other than a few, small errors here and ...

Ha-ha! Zaddie, I totally wasn't thinking about it ending like that! I mean, the mentioning of the bowl was a little odd, and then being locked out of the house ...

Wow, this is amazing DixielandMisfit. It really captures a cutter's view on things. It's deep as well, so that's another plus. =] This is really great, but I am picky ...

"Five, s ix, seven, eight!" shouted Jessica Brough out into the audience. The 's' in six needs to me lowcased and there needs to be spaces between each comma and ...

Hilarious Conrad. It had my rolling around my dog crate in laughter. Portal Turret: I don't hate you. Goodbye. And now, ladies and gentlemen, Sir Elton John! Sir Elton John: ...

Hey hey Paul! It's Corie!! Ha-ha! And I look upon this river capitalize the i For I love you fairest. capitalize the i again :? Won't you please will you ...