Chrysalia

Hullo soundofmind! You communicate emotions and human reality very well here. I could feel it activating the empathetic side to me from the moment it started. The rhymes do well ...

Greetings my good fellow human being! This poem was very sparse, emotional, and meaningful. I appreciated the minimalistic manner your wrote in, very much expressed the whole feeling of it ...

Wow, this is so healing, so touching! I just came back from a trip to my own grandfather, who is currently showing what a trooper he as the cancer eats ...

Chances and Changes, This is a really moving, simple piece to me. Exactly the kind of thing I love to write, much more than fiction or anything else really. Just ...

This poem has a very nice rythym and rhyme... I love the way you use language. I also love how you point out the bigger picture of romantic love, and ...

Personally, I am a big fan of stream of conscious... Virginia Woolf, etc. I feel like, for this kind of person, and for someone who has struggled with inability to ...

Well, here goes. I know what this is like, and the emotional connection I made with it made it very meaningful to me. It is disturbing, but I would agree ...

This is really good! I love the descriptions, both sensory, and dialogue wise. The way the characters interact is realistic and entertaining. One thing that would make the story a ...

I disagree with Llamahorse. The opening-opening dosn't really catch my attention (then again, neither did the begining of Tolkein's fabled epic, the fellowship of the ring) and its when the ...

This is an ethereal, magical and deeply insightful poem. It communicates some of the things that truly make life worth living for me (especially the bit about rainwater in cupped ...

This is a beautiful poem in every way. I would definantly encourage you to work on it... some parts, like "were a rythym of our hearts and nature" need some ...