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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I'm saving my sister ..!

    Hey! It'sRainbowInked, I'm rooh and I'll be your reviewer today... Your poem has a nice feeling to it, it's totally like nursery rhyme (like you said). I like the starting ...

    Jul 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Take A Chance- 15 (part 1)

    Hey! sorry couldn't reply before, but I'm here now... So as you asked me to give my opinion about your novel and according to me its really, really good. In ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Return of the White Flame 3 (an exerpt)

    Hey! I'm rooh and I will be your reviewer today.. First things first, I've read all the three parts and they are very good. The way you've described each character ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Reomi: Prologue [new]

    Hey! Paul, Sorry to review this late but here it is... Your start is a bit wrong, I get the crying part but you never wake up and start crying. ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: First kiss

    Hey! Great work with the poem, I really liked it. I loved the way you described her, the color of her hair, the way she was smiling, the way you ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Lilies

    IT'S BEAUTIFUL. There are the only words for what I've just read, it's a really beautiful story. The way described the character's, the things that they were going through. The ...

    May 21, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Fakebook-Chapter 3

    I liked it, but I'll just say one thing- Please check your work a dozen times before you submit it! I'm just going to point out some mistakes... ...were willing ...

    May 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Fakebook-Chapter 2

    Hey! Ankit. It's good. Witty and funny in some places, and it belongs there. So, that's good too. There are some grammatical mistakes which I've pointed below so you need ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Winterland.

    You really did a fabulous job with 'Winterland'. I don't know about others, but I think you should finish it here, its short and to the point and it's really ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    I love 'Writers Block'. It's imaginative, defined, beautiful and really really great. The best thing about this is your actually using something which initially was stopping you. I love the ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dear, YWS

    hey! I love your poem. It's also my story in so many ways, my family is also deprived of my attention, I watch less and less T.V. everyday, I never ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Fakebook-Chapter 1

    hey! Fakebook is quiet interesting and intriguing. It's very different from anything I've read recently, so I for one would definitely be waiting for the the next addition to the ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: .

    I read your poem, and you already know, that most people go through these emotions, a lot. A lot more than they should but I'm not that worried about them ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Please People Stop Fighting

    hey! I'm from India too and I can really identify with your writing as a Indian citizen as well as spectator to the various issues you mentioned in the poem. ...

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Burning Candle and the Moon *edited*

    hey! I loved your poem. It's beautifully descriptive. I could imagine the scene you described in the poem, I could actually picture it. The piece is really fabulous. Great work ...

    Apr 20, 2011


It's easier to come up with new stories than it is to finish the ones you already have. I think every author would feel that way.
— Stephanie Meyer