ChocolateLlama

Thanks for the review, but the character I was talking about was indeed myself. I don't know if you realized that or not, and I'm just saying because your comment ...

Well thanks, that means a lot to me. Don't worry, that's why I review to, so I'm not hurt. But really this is just what happens when I start thinking. ...

Hey man, didn't know if you got it or not, but this was about my grandmother, not just some friend. Didn't know if you got that or not, just letting ...

Thanks a lot for that. That really means a lot. I didn't really think much of it when I wrote it, but I do kind of know what this feels ...

Thanks a lot for the reviews and corrections, everyone! Like I said in reply to a comment by Roundsquare below, I only know what I'm talking about because of family ...

Hey, uh, author here. THis may come as a shock, but I'm only thirteen. Surprising, huh? Trust me, the only reason I feel like I know what I'm talking about ...

Oh wow. I don't know where to start. Perhaps how you pretty much described human nature in a few lines of poetry. Best poem I've read all day. Heck, best ...

Why thank you

Pretty nice job. I think it's cool that you put all of the words at the end of the stanzas at the end as a description of a day. I ...

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Thanks a lot for that. I was nervous about publishing my first piece of work, and although it hasn't made a HUGE splash, I'm grateful for your review.