ChocolateCello

thank you for the review my sweet child- to be honest I only really liked the first two stanzas and I kind of tacked on the last few because I ...

I really want to review this but it's too good to edit and I never review without constructive criticism so here's my message just to say wow

Hello! Cello is here to butt in! NoStoryTime, I'm sorry to say that not everyone's perfect. You've made quite a few mistakes in your response. Tense changes, quoting mistakes, starting ...

Thanks for the review! (Might I suggest using quotes in the future? The command it [.quote] words here [./quote])

Feel free! A few of my friends have done it too :P

Hey, THECATLOVER12345, it's good to see you're getting some reviewing in but I don't think this review truly helps the author. You need to better explain how they can improve ...

I'd love to tell you my inspiration but I'd rather not have it just out here (I don't want to offend the person who inspired this) so I'm going to ...

YO OKAY JUST STOPPING IN TO SAY THAT WAS F---ING RAD LIKE OKAY I JUST LOVE NATURAL VOICES SINGING SOFT SONGS LIKE AHHHHHHH OKAY SOORRRY I JUST REALLY LIKED LISTENING ...

Thanks for the review! Oh and '"I- I'm Daniel," i managed quietly, struggling to keep my breath steady.'

re reading again I've confused myself a ton now just ignore my first comment after the last quote

Of course!

I don't mind the comments. The more the marrier and if they all lean towards the same idea then its just emphasizing what i need to improve/do

Sorry to disappoint- i was going more for 'prove a point' than novelty though. I'm constantly talking about titles in review and nobody seemed to believe how important they were

I'm glad some of you guys appreciate this because it was PAINFUL to write with this many errors

I would love to review this but I can never manage a review without editing something and there's nothing to improve on so... (It's kinda perfect) The first bit of ...