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Hi there Jolene :) You see, you're poetry has many mistakes for a short poem like this one. First that you have to learn about poetry are that : 1) ...

Hi Cailey :) You're story was beautiful and a little confusing. By the way, I cannot be harsh. Don't know why =P Okay so there are just tiny mistakes. I'm ...

Brrr... Okay, here's my review as I requested. :) I thought the story was good. Prologue's fine but I guess you've made a lot of GRAMMAR mistakes. Boy, this Prologue ...

Soxx :D It's me again :) 'Alone' was really a powerful poem I thought! You expressed it wonderfully! I'm still confused with this part: "And 'sorry' carved on the arm." ...

Hey Soxx :D Awesome Poem you have here and I see you really have done a Good Job! xDD Everyone loves it but iLoveMore ^^ ♥♥ Only think is that ...

Oh My God! How do you write such ROMANTIC Poems :O ♥♥♥ I hope Mimi will always be your's!! How you express your love for her ... It's just wonderful. ...

It's Lovely written !!! All I can say is you've missed question marks (?) in these Lines... : Corrections: 2nd Stanza: Are you standing still Watching life in motion? 3rd ...

It's a very nice poem And you've really explained the girl's feelings... Only thing you need to fix is your construction of sentences. That's all you need to work on. ...