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Chirantha

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: How I survived high school: chapter 6

    You got caught cheating? Oh my god! :thud: Comments in bold letters. The year flew by and we had reached the time of our final exams. My first two papers ...

    Nov 10, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: How I survived high school: chapter 5

    Aww, poor Leandra. I suppose she was heart - broken. :D Comments in bold letters. (I can't seem to put any colour :roll: ) A week ( had ) passed ...

    Nov 10, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: How I survived high school: Chapter 4

    So, finnally made it to high school, eh? Let's see this. The scene was like it would have been on any other normal day but in my heart, I knew ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: How I survived high school: Chapter 3

    Hey, sorry for not reviewing your story sooner. Okay, firstly, good job on naming the main character or the your self. Natasha was a really good name for you. I ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: One Escape

    Great poem. It's greatly written. I think I agree with Gracee that this was a emotional poem. But a start of the poem is a bit not well written. Tear ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Frozen lakes and sugar cakes

    A really cute poem indeed. It's nice to have a break from reading lonely, depressing and throughly sad poems of yours. :lol: :wink: You used a great way to make ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I never told you I loved you

    Don't exaggerate Searria. I'm on a mucher bigger rampage. I reviewed too much I think. Well, this poem was good as all the other poems you had written. Well, maybe ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Summer's Last Breath

    Fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. The way you converted the end of Summer into a poem is just marvelous. But I have to ask you. Why did you write about a war ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Romance with the Sky

    I liked this poem. A lot. But I think you are living in the pre-historic age. People wouldn't think you are crazy if you were building something to fly. It ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Chasing the Wind

    My word, this....this is some poem. It's the best ever poem I've read. I'm sorry to have not understood the metaphor, but the phrases, oh, the words, so possesive, so ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I'll see you tomorrow.

    It's a saying in YWS 'Chi' We can dive into it and review or just normally review. Okay, about this poem. Well, I think it's a great poem and and ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Goodbye, my insane, beautiful love

    Hello there. I think I should be the so called punctuationist. Firstly, about this poem. Again I say, you are a briliant poet. It's how you use the words and ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I tried to write a poem....

    Haha, cute and great poem. I suppose you wrote this while feeling like that. It's perfectly connected lines added interest to the poem. And I think this poem is good ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Angel, I was always yours

    Did I ever tell you that you were one of the most briliant sad poem writers I had ever seen or heard of. Well, now I do. I mean, see ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: fall

    I loved this poem. Your descriptions formed a razor sharp image in my mind. I mean, you had clearly described the feelings, sensations, and even had illustrated the feelings felt ...

    Oct 4, 2008


Overripe sushi, The master Is full of regret.
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