ChildofEden

Hello! I thought I'd drop in an lend a hand...or typewriter as the case may be. First off, props to you for touching on a usually untouched subject. As people ...

Another poem by me... I've been really bored, and I've done quite a few reviews, so I've decided to write a few poems. EDIT: Revised poem: Sometimes I feel like ...

Hola! & a late welcome to the poetry section to you! Okay, so a lot of what first came to mind, darko already nailed. However, there are a couple things ...

Hiya! Okay, first of all, as a lover of Greek mythology, I air-high-five you. Not many people use this many characters. The entire poem has potential, but it seems a ...

Hola! I decided to fulfill Leja's wish and be another person to comment on this piece! I too found this poem to be just a tad too confusing. I can ...

Hola! & a late welcome to YSW to you! Mind if I give this a go? Speaking as a person who almost ALWAYS writes in rhyme, I'm proud of you ...

Hiya! The title in itself caught my eye, & I thought I'd lend a hand....or keyboard as the case may be. Ok? Ok. After reading the poem, there's a few ...

I liked it in the sense that it's something a little different. The rhyming was a tad off to me, and like the others have said, it almost doesn't sound ...

Hola! Mind if I take a whack at it? I was halfway between liking it and not because it's a pretty used idea. Ms. Bondage up there already hit the ...

Wow, words cannot express how much I loved this! You took an idea that's a given but that most people won't really talk about, and you completely brought it out! ...

I have to admit that the first thought that came to mind when I saw the title was "You have GOT to be kidding me." I was expecting something really ...

Yay, my turn! Well, first of all, I'm all for romance. Love it. Second of all, this was all just a tad too confusing because it took most of the ...

The idea was good, but maybe add a little more to it? It was a little hard to follow with all the line changes and everything, but overall, I look ...

Well, anything I have to say has pretty much been said! Although, you might want to explain why you call her that. It's just kind of random. This just kind ...

Wow, so I really do like this one! It was one of those "Grah! Tell me more!" moments. I like the air of both mythology and reality all intertwined. The ...