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Go, Brad! :lol:

Your everlasting desire to make me feel terrible is killing me not slowly I wish I could write like you.

this poem had a really weird rhthym, however, it was an amazing poem. sometime long poems can seem to drag on and on but this one is great and i ...

the most fascinating thing about this poem was the title...thats what reall caught my eye. other than that, i basically agree with brad though--aka Incandescence.

for some reason, i read this poem with such vitality and enthusiasm which is well so therefore, well done. i liked it.

but i guess its cool.

i personally am not interested in anything related to nature because i hate nature but the rhthym and flow--i was pretty impressed with...cant complain about that.

very good! i loved this! I CANT EVEN COME UP WITH ANY COMMENTS OR SUGGESTIONS! way wicked! case CLOSED.

i liked it without the changes to tell you the truth. it was ambiguous but i liked that a lot...good work.

i really like this...especially the last was really fitting and ended the poem well. however, the title of the poem didn't seem to fit with the poem itself. anyway, great ...

very creative and fast-paced and ultra wicked (wicked is good). way beyond awesome, muse! luvvit! "The sawn step on the evolutionary ladder. " hmm...sounds familiar, lol

this was good poem--im not sure if it's supposed to be this way--but i thought i was funny. at first, i didnt think i was going to like it, but ...

i agree with muse. go sam!

i can relate to this poem as well and i think it would make a beautiful slow song...keep up the good work. ~bestsellers.proboards31.com~

im not so sure what to my personal opinion the poem was too short and chopped up. i think maybe with the use of commas and periods, though it would ...