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This is an embarassment to the writing culture. I beg of you--just...don't show this to anyone.

OK...I'm going to do the Incandescence sort of meditative no-capitals thing... Hm. Whatever. All I can say is, Your effort to imitate is distinctively visible.

Thanks a lot...ive never posted any of my stories anywhere one has ever read them...I guess I'll start putting some of my other stuff on here, then!

I agree with Brad (Incandescence). You did have a lot of imaging. However, it was good and I especially liked the part about the kissing in the rain (yes, I ...

Whoops....never mind...ignore what I said about the nine poems...you said it's one. But it still doesn't seem to connect...are you sure this isn't nine poems?

I don't know if I can even make myself say something about this other than--WOW. I mean, WOW. To say I love this poem? Heh, Love is utterly an understatement.

I really liked it and all, but one question: What language?

I liked this poem. Mostly the ending. However, I think that it would sound much better if you took out some of the "Buts" and "Ands." Try reading it without ...

You have a good concept and a strong closing line, The closing line and the concept were the only reason why I didn't totally trash this poem.

How can you just drive by it, in you? I don't know how the heck that "in you" got there, but I kinda like it there...even though it doesn't make ...

If you ask me, Crysi, nothing needs to be changed.

Yet another midnight poem! I wrote this poem with simply and idea. I wasn't necessarily thinking about it or even noticing what I'm writing. And Brad, I don't know if ...

nah, that's not me. that's jennifer knapp--my ultimate role model! thanks brad--i'm so glad you liked it! i think i may end up going into writing song lyrics...this was my ...

Sweetly ambiguous--I really enjoyed this and I kind of can sympathise...last year a guy I knew...hung himself by a tree with some rope in his backyard.

Sounds interesting. But what age group would you suggest this to?