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Come, Take my hand, AGGHHH!!! Reminded me of Britney Spear's 'Everytime!' :shock: Anyway, I'll have to agree with Bobo--even though I did like this part: There’s a man waiting at ...

This seemed a lot like a story...perhaps it could have gone in the narrative section? So I view, close by, always so hesitant, but right there for you, your guardian, ...

This poem is the evidence of the type of poetry that I have been trying to write for as long as I have been writing poetry. Even though this poem ...

Considering your age, there isn't much I could say, but this poem does need a little bit of critiquing. Well, the main thing the poem lacked was imagery. It was ...

The way...the way...the way...the way...I must admit, this gave me a headache. Somehow, this poem reminded me of the book and movie "Seven People You'll Meet in Heaven." I have ...

pausing as they drip into oblivion for You I doubt you were talking to God, but please be aware than when you capitalize "you" it indicates you're speaking of God...I ...

I'm saying this so it can be pushed back up to the top. :lol: :twisted: Naughty Morgan :twisted:

because I’m a human being and I must feel something even if its just a breeze. _____and_______ Or maybe the seasons are changing, the earth is turning, and I suppose ...

I agree with Sam (Matt Bellamy) about the brackets part...those few pieces were slightly disturbing. I liked the meaning behind this poem, but I was agitated by two things: 1. ...

I could have sworn I already commented on this...hm...I guess I'm getting old (my birthday IS tomorrow,lol) But I agree with was very hard to continue on. she wears her ...

Okay I was pretty impressed by the first stanza and this part in particular: I see you in the shadows, I see you in my pain This part was really ...

journey ended After this line, the poem seemed to die. Like, all the things you had said about the emotions had been buried, so therefore, the: i remember i reflect ...

I agree with Midnight, this was a very enjoyable poem. Steady and to-the-point. However, in so many ways, it didn't really even seem like a poem to me. It seemed ...

Well, I can't tell who wrote what, or what wrote who (I know, that makes no sense, :lol: ) but I liked both of them. Kind of reminds me of ...

HM...I didn't understand this poem at all...however, I liked that. It reminds me of this poem I wrote called Helen's Lane. Very good. From the title to the last stanza, ...