Chelsea4827

Hello DramaLlama! I really like this, I found myself trying to hum the words in my head but I kind of fail! Aha. It is very well written and it ...

Hi there! I liked it, and it was well written but it was just talking throughout really. There was hardly any description and not much emotion! If you add more ...

Hello. I like this it is rather good as it flows well and other than a few little errors it was well written. I love the way you have structured ...

Hello there :) I really liked this, it was different but good. The flow of it was also good but I do think you should just reread it as there ...

Hi there. This is really cute, and I like how you have linked the verses together so the first time you’re unsure and then when it comes round to the ...

Hello. I really liked this piece! It was well written and it flowed well, the only thing I would say though (like the others said) is that it is very ...

Hello Wow, I really like this, you have written it really well! The imagery is excellent, and I kind of wish it was longer than 250 words (or whatever) because ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this. It’s short but clear! You have written it really well and the flow of it is good, so well done to that :) The message ...

Hello. Just to let you know I really am not that good a poetry so sorry if it’s not a great review just thought I would let you know what ...

Hello I really enjoyed this, it is very good. It flows well but I do think that the verses are very short! I love your chorus though, so well done ...

Hello, I think this is a really good start for an opening but I do think it is a little short. The only part that I am not so sure ...

I think this version is better than the first and I like what you changed it to for it to rhyme. All of the start of your lines are capitalized ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this; I think it had a powerful message! It was really well written, well done. Sorry I don’t have much more to say about it ...

Hello,I really enjoyed this. I love what you have written here, it has a clear and well thought out message. I think it’s already been pointed out about the last ...

I like this but it is very long! (Like the other two said) Your message is very obvious and trust me I know that feeling. I like how the poem ...