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Cheerio

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Historical Fiction Re: Almost June: Chapter 2

    Hey, twiggy! I found your story and decided to give it a read and I have 3 things I'd like to say (Disclaimer: I'm not great at reviews but I ...

    Sep 4, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If reviews were easy

    Hey there! Just stopping by to write a review, sorry in advance if it’s short (I’m not great at reviews) The first stanza was so relatable that I smiled. Don’t ...

    Aug 15, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Woodpecker

    Hey there! I’m Cheerio and I’m going to attempt to review your poem. I’m going to be honest, at first I was confused as to who or what the woodpecker ...

    Aug 15, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Watching People Fall in Love

    (Sorry, the last one was supposed to be a review) Very well done, I can feel the longing through the words. I myself am that person watching through the window ...

    Aug 10, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I can't wait to go to college.

    Hey there! Sorry if this is short, I’ll try my best to give some feedback. Overall I thought this was a very short and truthful poem, it feels like one ...

    Aug 10, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Her Figure

    This was my first time reading a reverse poem and it was awesome! This poem is so relatable it’s almost scary. It’s really an eye opener to how most women ...

    Aug 9, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stuck.

    Hey there! This was a very relatable poem and I really enjoyed it. 3 things I really liked were: - The way you made the words go down when you ...

    Aug 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Babysitting Little Me

    This poem was beautiful and touching. Many things written here I can relate to in my own life. I don’t know if the woman in the poem is a reflection ...

    Aug 9, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Apparatus

    Hey there! This was a cute and motivating short story. I loved how the coach tried to keep her spirits up and re-motivate her. The message is clear: no one ...

    Aug 9, 2024


The very worst use of time is to do very well what need not be done at all.
— Benjamin Tregoe