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Re: Moonlight: Chapter One
Hey there! So, I'm going to drop a quick review down here, I'll run through nitpicks and things first and then we'll get down to the good stuff. Okay, here ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 1
Hello! Okay, so we're going to review this fantastical first chapter you've got here. I'm going to run through a couple of nitpicks first and then we'll get down to ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 1
Hey hey! So lets get this review going shall we, I'm going to run through nitpicks first and then I'll finish off on all the good stuff. So here goes: ...
Jun 6, 2017 -
Re: The beginning
Hiya! Alright, so lets get to reviewing this great opening that you have here. I'm going to run through nitpicks first and then we'll get down to the good stuff. ...
Jun 6, 2017 -
Re: The Battle for Paris : Chapter 3 : The Cardinal.
Leek! Alright, last one for today. As with the others I'm going to run through nitpicks first and then we'll get to all that stuff you've done well. She looked ...
Jun 5, 2017 -
Re: The Battle for Paris : Chapter 2: The rebellion.
Alright Leek, we're back at it again. Review number 2 coming right up. As with the last one I'm going to run through nitpicks first and then get to the ...
Jun 5, 2017 -
Re: The Battle for Paris : Chapter 1 : Paris.
Leek! Okay, so as promised I'm here with a review. I'm gonna run through the chapters one at a time so bare with me. I'm gonna run through nitpicks first ...
Jun 5, 2017 -
Re: Project Rose Petal: Chapter 2 - The Consumption of Seeds
Hiya! Sorry this is a little overdue, works kinda got in the way, but lets get down to it now. Okay, as with last time I'm gonna run through nitpicks ...
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: Firebreed chapter 1-- Red Stained Note (Edit)
Hey! So I'm going to run through a few nitpicks first, I haven't read the other reviews so I'm sorry if I repeat anything that's already been said, and then ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Project Rose Petal: Chapter One - The Dormant One
Hi! Okay, so im going to write you up a review for this chapter of yours. I'll start with nitpicks and then get down into the good stuff, so here ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Queen of the Lake-Prologue
Hey!!! Okay so this was great! I'm going to quickly run through a couple of nitpicks first and get them out of the way, they're all tiny things, and then ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: The Hunger Games: Flames Burn Brighter in the Dark
YO! WHatcha think you're doing ending it like that! What happens next you mean mean person xD Okay imma run through a couple quick nitpicks first and then we can ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Five Year Old with a Color Scheme
Hai hai! Okay... so there's my feels in tatters. Okay I only have one lil point that I dont think other peeps have already said and then I'll go ahead ...
Mar 22, 2017