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Re: Surviving The Darkness
Hey Sujit 😁 First off, you have quite an interesting idea here. A diamond still in the rough, but shows lots of potential as a writer. It was a hot ...
Aug 20, 2019 -
Re: Here Lies Insanity - Chapter 1
Hey Aliceinhorrorland! First off, great beginning. Leaves the reader a whole lot of questions and possible theories about the book which makes them want to read on to find out. ...
Apr 26, 2019 -
Re: The Battlefield
Hey Che!😁 This is Chase with a review First off this is actually a great piece of work. You've managed to describe the environment and what the protagonist is feeling ...
Apr 18, 2019 -
Re: The Forest
Hi Yasmindaiha! First off, I'm loving it. Has alot of potential. Could even become an entire book about this one scene that you wrote. You really have magic in your ...
Dec 13, 2018 -
Re: Sognore: Chapter One
Hey Aleta! First things first, i really enjoyed the piece. I loved the description you added which let us into your head, or rather, your vision of Sognore and damn ...
Aug 18, 2018 -
Re: The Wise Man and The Barber
Hey aulyasela! Chase here for a review. I personally like to start with the good things then move onto the bad. So first thing first :), i love the concept ...
Jul 8, 2018 -
Re: Homecoming 1.2
Hey Elinor I would first like to thank you for posting such a good piece for me to read :). I personally enjoyed a lot of the things that you ...
Jul 8, 2018 -
Re: and the snow is falling up into the sky
Hey mephistophelesangel! FIRST THINGS THINGS FIRST, you are naturally amazing at writing. I love the way the contrasted each each character. The insecurities, fears, and nervousness of Jack and Ben ...
Jul 8, 2018 -
Re: Melting into each other...
Hey Eros. First things first. You are one mean writer. I really enjoyed reading his love story between two souls. It was very descriptive and urged you to keep reading ...
Jul 8, 2018
