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Re: I'd Only Wanted A Tissue
Hey AnarchyWolf! I decided to review your short since it's been awhile since I've reviewed something that wasn't poetry. I hope you find my review helpful! I'm going to start ...
Dec 13, 2016 -
Re: A Tomb of Light and Music
Hey, chhlovebooks! I'm here to review your short. It's been awhile since I've reviewed one of your works but I'm excited to see how you've improved :D The imagery is ...
Dec 11, 2016 -
Re: Sabbath
Hey Aleta, I wanted to review one of your poems so here I am. I hope you find this helpful. I quite enjoyed this poem. I definitely enjoy your style. ...
Dec 11, 2016 -
Re: Friends
Hey NicolMemo! I enjoyed this poem quite a bit but I still have some criticism. The first thing I want to say is that I'm not a fan of using ...
Dec 7, 2016 -
Re: ☽ [moonscapade]
Hey Pomp c: I'm going to try and review your poem (I'm not sure why as I don't think I have anything to say to improve any of your poems ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Knowing Gods chapter 1
Hey it's marmalade here for her promised review! I hope you like my review and if you have any criticism for my review please PM me or reply to this ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: In The Dark
Hey Curiosity227! I'm here to review your poem and sorry if my review is bad it's late her xD Anyway the biggest issues I have with this poem is structure. ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Moon
Hey bookishminecrafter. I liked this poem more than your most recent one. I felt like the metaphor was good, the imagery was good, but it was strongly lacking in emotion. ...
Nov 23, 2016 -
Re: Humanity
Hey bookishminecrafter. I liked this poem but I felt like it was sort of just dialogue. I would like some imagery, go into the detail, what are your emotions? I ...
Nov 23, 2016 -
Re: dandelion
Hey Rose. I really like this poem. It's better than Belle, which was the poem I thought was your best so far. That makes this one your best so far ...
Nov 23, 2016 -
Re: Fishing Trip
Hey Daddy ;) I hope you like your review ;) Nothing wrong with the story or plot, it's all grammar issues and such. So let's get to the grammar: She ...
Nov 17, 2016 -
Re: seven reasons
Hey amelie! I'm here for a quick review~ I like the thought behind this poem but I feel like it could have been formatted better. I know poetry doesn't have ...
Nov 16, 2016 -
Re: A Self-Proclaimed Martyr
Hey Mage! It's me here to review your short! First grammar! There was no need to give her anymore nightmares. There was no need to give her any more nightmares. ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: What Silence Actually Is?
Hey! I'm here to review your poem. I thought it’s the absence of sound, B b ut there’s still my mind which bores. I felt it’s what the deaf heard, ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: mason jars collecting dust on the windowsill
Hey OnlyWaffle! I'm here to review your poem
Oct 30, 2016