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Re: Summer Teardrops
I came to this poem because I was so captivated by the title, and the imagery is perfect. I love how you have used beautiful images of the lakes in ...
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Re: Sleeeeep
Well done for expressing these kinds of feelings because there are few people in society who are actually willing to be truthful about things. This poem is refreshing in the ...
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Re: I See Fire
This poem was so beautiful to read, and I loved the descriptions of the fire. Your choice of language was fascinating and creepy. The line that particularly got me was: ...
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Re: It's 9:00 on a Saturday Night
I read one of your poems earlier and now I've found this one and I think it's really good. Your style is very different to any style I've seen before, ...
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Re: Stars and Galaxies
This is so beautiful. I love the description of the galaxies, and the way you've spoken about colour. My favourite line of this poem is: "A streak of glittering violet," ...
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Re: Suicide
I think that the emotions of this poem and the imagery really make readers think. It's also very accurate in the way it addresses the topic of suicide. Definitely keep ...
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Re: Leftovers
Hey, well done for writing this, because I think it's beautiful. I love how at first sight, this poem seems so simple, but yet it has complexity beneath. My favourite ...
Jun 11, 2016
