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Charlotte2

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Summer Teardrops

    I came to this poem because I was so captivated by the title, and the imagery is perfect. I love how you have used beautiful images of the lakes in ...

    Jun 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Sleeeeep

    Well done for expressing these kinds of feelings because there are few people in society who are actually willing to be truthful about things. This poem is refreshing in the ...

    Jun 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Fantasy Re: I See Fire

    This poem was so beautiful to read, and I loved the descriptions of the fire. Your choice of language was fascinating and creepy. The line that particularly got me was: ...

    Jun 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: It's 9:00 on a Saturday Night

    I read one of your poems earlier and now I've found this one and I think it's really good. Your style is very different to any style I've seen before, ...

    Jun 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Stars and Galaxies

    This is so beautiful. I love the description of the galaxies, and the way you've spoken about colour. My favourite line of this poem is: "A streak of glittering violet," ...

    Jun 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Suicide

    I think that the emotions of this poem and the imagery really make readers think. It's also very accurate in the way it addresses the topic of suicide. Definitely keep ...

    Jun 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Leftovers

    Hey, well done for writing this, because I think it's beautiful. I love how at first sight, this poem seems so simple, but yet it has complexity beneath. My favourite ...

    Jun 11, 2016


I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin.
— David Eddings