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Now, in this situation, what would I do...? Well, I would probably FREAK OUT! Getting my hopes up like that would not be appreciated. XD Then again, I guess I ...

Haha, hilarious! Man, how did you come up with this? Everything was spot-on! The word choice, the sentence fluency, the emotions, the story and the humour! This cracked me up ...

Okay! Here's the review I told you I was going to give! First of all, let me say it again. Welcome to YWS. I'm excited to see more work out ...

Did you miss me? That's right! It's your favourite co-conspiracy theorist! Anyways, that's not what I'm here to talk about today. Today, I'm here to talk about this positively beautiful ...

Interesting... You see, I must first commend you for putting one of these up. You must have known that it would receive hate in some way shape or form (even ...

Well done on this. Although it didn't quite capture me as some other poems have. I believe it's just a matter of the content being very dark. I usually don't ...

Ooooh! That was really good! Especially for a start! Your words were concise, appealing and well thought out. I have a hard time believing this was one of the first ...

This was a very cute poem! I can obviously see you like Nyan Cat! My biggest nitpick is that in certain areas, the sentence fluency was a bit choppy, and ...

Hmmm. I was honestly a little dissapointed when I read this. I couldn't tell if he (or she) was talking to someone or themselves. I know poetry usually has very ...

Well, I must say, this was excellent! A few small mistakes here and there, but I won't point them out, as they only halted the flow for a quick second. ...

Man, that was really cool! An ingenious poem! I never thought of Google that way! And suddenly, I too want to be like Google! But I'm left pondering; what happened ...

Amazing poem. I'm predicting right now that this is gonna hit Literary Spotlight for sure. You totally deserve it. You know, I've always been an advocate of protecting the environment, ...

You know, I was extremely surprised by this piece. The surprise was, I didn't particularly enjoy it quite as much as the other reviewers. But the thing is, I don't ...

Well, if I had to pick a word to describe it, I'd say; full of potential. I like how you've left the story open and given us a couple questions ...

Hahaha! I loved it! It's the perfect balance of intricate wordplay, a great storyline and humour! As far as I saw, there were no grammar mistakes and the story flowed ...