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dude, that line is in fall out boy's song "my heart is the worst kind of weapon". still a good line though. fits in with the poem.

that means that it's worth keeping yourself going just for the little things. i didn't know you wrote that. but, sometimes, all you can do is apologize. and i apologize ...

i understood the french. this was just a mesh of very pretty words thrown together. nothing special but that doesn't mean it was bad. you can do write beautifully sometimes, ...

hahaha, wow... this gets worse and worse! so now i have a lack of imagination and talent?! #shoots self# :D

hahahaha. there is something about everything you say that amuses me :) maybe we are superficial, i couldn't say. but i think this is just a really crap story. of ...

ha while you were commenting, i was editing... damn you time zones. damn you to hell.

i would have quite liked this poem. but the last verse made me really, really like it.

ahhh, i know the ending is CRAP. but i kind of enjoyed writing the poem and it was all flowing and i got to the end and realised i had ...

wow, for me this poem had a weird erotic edge to it that i don'tthink you meant at all. maybe it's just because i am extremely tired and aggravated. good ...

the poem was pretty. nothing to blow me away, but nice to read. even if you had just written this line and nothing else, this poem would have been worth ...

that's weird because those chracters are me and my friend and it happened to me....ah well, it was just a practice piece anyways so it's all good :wink:

yes, it's a true story. unfortunately :) thanks for all the great comments. (and i will definitley work on the a) b) c) pargraph, I'm not sure about it myself).

micah -- hey i've been here for a week or three now and i just figured that out today :) niteowl -- any better??? and i before e thing made ...

what's the guy thinking? yeah, i wish i knew that, too. thank you very mucho for the comments :D

he feels the same way? that isn't fair! #dies of envy# i think i would change the first verse. it just didn't GRAB me. i think the poem is pretty ...